8 [Report This]Date: May 01, 2007 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Like paperclips or torn pieces of paper, but not.
Nice. I like the atmosphere you set up at the beginning here. I found it resolves a touch too quickly for me, but your imagery, as always, is beautiful.
What I don't understand is why you don't have more reviews!
8 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2007 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
"There’s that clean, summery smell of lake water and a warmth that comes off of him in waves, sending a hum through her skin." Beautiful line - beautiful story. I love the ending.
Date: April 30, 2007 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like how Pam just said it - no hiding anymore. *fingers crossed that something like this happens*
Date: April 30, 2007 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah, cliff hanger ending! I think he'll choose Pam. How could he not? Anyway, thank you for writing this.
Date: April 30, 2007 06:21 am Title: Chapter 1
This is so how I want to see it on the show....which means, of course, it won't happen. Lovely imagery, as always, and perfectly them. Loved it.
Date: April 30, 2007 05:27 am Title: Chapter 1
I can completely see this happening. In my head Pam absolutely runs off during this episode and Jim absolutely goes after her. The result will be soft and quiet and just like this. Wonderful and lovely as always.
10 [Report This]Date: April 29, 2007 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
fff you already know i LOVE this but SERIOUSLY i read it again and HEY, WRITERS. MAKE THESE SCENES HAPPEN MMKAY. erinnnnnnnn i can't wait for jim and pam any longerrrrr. MY HEART ACHES WITH THE BLACKNESS OF EMO TEARS or something. hi.
10 [Report This]Date: April 29, 2007 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really beautifully written, and I can't wait to see this episode to see all that happens, I'm ready for this thing to reach it's climax just so we can get to the other side, and hopefully that will be with these two finally together!
I loved the melancholy and description of this piece, it wasn't overly done, just the right amount to make a beautiful story, fantastic job.
Date: April 29, 2007 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh. How do you do this to me with every story? Melancholy and hope and that simple, intense, emotional pang right there on the page. (That makes no sense, but I really don't even know how to describe the feeling of this story.)
It makes her think of cotton sheets and bare skin and waking up to someone who makes waking up a little less like just wanting to fall back asleep.
Gorgeous. Just a beautiful thing. And the last two words (She knows) are damn near perfect. Ah, if only.
10 [Report This]Date: April 29, 2007 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
I usually don't read anything that contains spoilers but you write so beautifully, I couldn't help it. "...trying so hard to be strong when she's not." is really about Pam this Season. She's stronger than she's been but not as confident as she should be. I hope there is a moment of truth soon. Thanks for posting this.
9 [Report This]Date: April 29, 2007 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lovely, lovely, lovely. The imagery, the emotions, all of it--I felt like I could see, smell, and hear everything around them. Such beautiful writing, as usual, and I love this line: "With half of his face in shadow and the other half in the pinkish orange light of a sunset. It makes her think of cotton sheets and bare skin and waking up to someone who makes waking up a little less like just wanting to fall back asleep."
Fabulous work. I'm just keeping my fingers crossed for the next two weeks that this is how it really goes down! -CH
10 [Report This]Date: April 29, 2007 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
It was beautiful and melodic and heartbreaking and wonderful. I'm not sure how to read the end... does he stay with Karen, will he come back to Pam? But it doesn't matter... because it's gorgeous! ;)
Author's Response:
The ending is a bit ambiguous. I hadn't really intended for it to be that way, but every ending I tried I didn't really like so I left it like this. And I'm trying to decide if I like the ambiguity of it or not.
But, in my mind, he'll be with Pam soon enough. :)
Thanks for reading!