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Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2023 07:58 am Title: Five Firsts

A great and very real look at their relationship!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2007 04:00 pm Title: Five Firsts

I totally agree, the show will not suck if Jim and Pam are together.  It will be like Season 2 with stolen glances, subtle hand holding and smooches, i.e. more romance.  Who doesn't love that?

Author's Response: I know. Everyone loves that!

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2007 02:15 am Title: Five Firsts

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 10:53 pm Title: Five Firsts

So adorable. I loved so much that Jim got her flowers just because and Pam was just so flabberghasted by it. SO GREAT. And DWIGHT talking about women being like beets...priceless.

Author's Response: Who doesn't like getting flowers from a guy, right? Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 09:55 pm Title: Five Firsts

Awww! So sweet, each of the five, but the flowers one really got to me :)


Author's Response: I love getting flowers so I had to include that one. Thanks!

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 07:51 pm Title: Five Firsts

So much word on Pam getting flowers at the office.  Jim better make up for past Valentine's Days in S4!



Author's Response: I know! We need more Valentine's love!

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 07:24 pm Title: Five Firsts

Okay, first I'll just go ahead and get this out of the way: SQUEE!!!

Next, I would like to say that I love Pam changing her mind about her favorite flowers (so cute!), and I love Dwight in this fic ("Women are like beets"?  Hilarious!), and I LOVELOVELOVE the clarification in the title of the last one.  Ha! 



Author's Response: I was just going to go with First I Love You, but then I remembered that sort of already happened so glad you liked the edit!

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 04:41 pm Title: Five Firsts

Awww...sweet, sweet, fluffy-wuffy fic.  *Rubs against face like a teeny kitty.*

I, too, believe I would be nothing but charmed and interested in watching these two together.  Well done! 



Author's Response: A teeny kitten? Is it the dominant male? ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 03:59 pm Title: Five Firsts

Wow. Youhave completely convinced me that Jim & Pam still work after the will they/won't they is gone (actually I didn't really need convincing but I don't know how anyone could read this and not be totally sure it would work). Absolutely adorable.  I loved every little story.

Author's Response: It will work! It will work! We just have to keep telling ourselves that.

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 01:59 pm Title: Five Firsts

Yep.  See that?  Together and still lovable.  It's easy as pie to accomplish.  ps: I love the changes!!  Thanks for this.  It made me smile.

Author's Response: Thanks again for the beta dear!

Reviewer: jadewinehouse Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 01:16 pm Title: Five Firsts

This was really lovely fluffy! It made me smile :) Now I really need to check your earlier stories and see whether I've read them (if not, I'll do that asap!), you're are very talented.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the other ones as well!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 01:09 pm Title: Five Firsts

I was on board already, but I definitely think you proved your point. They're so adorable! So perfect! And we can see little glimpses even in the workplace setting! (I'm very, very enthusiastic about this fic!)

Author's Response: Yeah, I tried to have them all in the office since I figured we would see them as part of the "documentary" so glad you liked that.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 01:07 pm Title: Five Firsts

I reviewed at LJ, too, but I am so looking forward to Pam & Jim telling the other about Dwight & Angela!!! And all of these are so fluffilicious. JAM together has so many stories to tell, it could take years, and years, and years....

Author's Response: Not only years, but possibly a spin-off? OK, maybe not, but I would totally watch that.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 12:49 pm Title: Five Firsts

awww......just lovely!  I totally agree there is much fun to be had with together Jam in season 4!!!


Author's Response: Let's hope! Here's to season 4!

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 12:42 pm Title: Five Firsts

aw! fluffy as clouds, and don't I love you for it!  (I do.)

Author's Response: Glad you do!

Reviewer: Caro84 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 12:12 pm Title: Five Firsts

There needs to be more fics like this! Absolutely loved it.

Author's Response: I will try to write more fics like this then just for you -- and everyone else that likes fluff like me. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 11:45 am Title: Five Firsts

I was in need of fluff this afternoon.  Thanks so much for that.

I loved the "orangesicle" colored paper, that made me happy. :) 



Author's Response: It's warm here right now, I have orangecicles on the brain so it had to be added. Thanks!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 11:39 am Title: Five Firsts

How nice!  I never understand why people think that the failure of Moonlighting and some other shows has anything to do with the Office.  Jim and Pam getting along and dating would be like Season 1 or 2 without Roy.  No big deal!

My favorite line was "Jim hated when Dwight's dumb beet analogies made sense."  And I really liked your chapter title:  First I Love You [As a Couple, Not as Single People Admitting Their Feelings in a Parking Lot].

 



Author's Response: Because you know Dwight would use beets as analogies for everything! Thanks for noticing those details and yeah, this is not Moonlighting!

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