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Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2017 06:38 am Title: Epilogue: Tangy Chicken and Fruit Kabobs

Well, Jim wound up with pam, but what a price, knowing she had fucked a douche like Ryan. Jim is always shown to be a dickless wuss. He should have kicked Ryan;s butt, dumped Pam, and faced the future with balls intact

Reviewer: EJER Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2009 10:59 pm Title: French Toast Slam and Moons Over My Hammy

I laughed so hard at the line from Dwight! How funny!!

Reviewer: Token Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2008 02:34 pm Title: Twix, Snapple, Yogurt Parfait

LOVE the Heathcliff reference. This is a fun story...totally different take from my usual JAM obsession. I'm enjoying it -- thanks!

Reviewer: CHT 8635 Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2008 03:59 pm Title: Epilogue: Tangy Chicken and Fruit Kabobs

Aw PhillyJim! I really enjoyed reading this. I honestly didn't know how is was going to end - you had set it up so it could be any of the three possibilities you mentioned. I can't help but be happy that Jim got the girl in the end though!

Reviewer: CHT 8635 Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2008 03:08 pm Title: Twix, Snapple, Yogurt Parfait

Great chapter! Not a pairing I would really have thought of but your superb writing manages to make it work! Still feel bad for Jim though!

Reviewer: CHT 8635 Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2008 03:07 pm Title: Twix, Snapple, Yogurt Parfait

Great chapter! Not a pairing I would really have thought of but your superb writing manages to make it work! Still feel bad for Jim though!

Reviewer: Kestrel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2008 01:23 am Title: Epilogue: Tangy Chicken and Fruit Kabobs

Fantastic. The concept was great, and the writing was, too.

Reviewer: katoepotatoe Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28, 2007 08:41 pm Title: Yogurt Parfait and Cheese Fries

I really wasn't sure if I'd like this at first, but I kept reading and eventually-- this ended up being one of my favorite stories on here, ever.

Very nicely done, funny, poignant, even a little bit heartbreaking at just the right times. Now with S4 Ryan, it's a little hard to imagine him being so nice, lol but I still like to revisit this one once in while because you did such a good job.

Reviewer: CarolineK Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 01, 2007 12:13 pm Title: Yogurt Parfait and Cheese Fries

I read this story a few weeks back and loved it! BUT, I especially loved that in last weeks episode Jim was a sports writer in his Second Life. So great!

Reviewer: OpalArk Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2007 11:08 am Title: Epilogue: Tangy Chicken and Fruit Kabobs

This was a really great story and it kept me here reading all morning. When the phone vibrated during Jim and Pam's kiss, for some reason I wanted it to be Ryan calling from the parking lot where he could see them.....but it was still pretty cool. I'm glad she chose Jim, and within the context of your story, I don't think that was "unoriginal" at all. I skipped the epilogue because of the possible Harry Potter spoilers, thanks for the warning.

All and all, great read, thanks for sharing it!

Reviewer: OpalArk Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2007 07:58 am Title: Sushi and Onion Rings

I thought this chapter was really well-written. I like your interpretation of Ryan's inner thoughts. I especially liked the bit where Ryan was all annoyed with Jim's sighing and such. I'll definitely keep reading.

Reviewer: Jamfan55 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 09:39 pm Title: Yogurt Parfait and Cheese Fries

I totally enjoyed this fic, but you've GOT to include a Harry Potter spoiler warning.  I've luckily already read it, but if I found out the ending from a JAM fic, I'd be really upset!!

Author's Response:

Thanks. I added a spoiler warning earlier this evening. I hope everyone can see it now.

Reviewer: Raj Patel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 09:33 pm Title: Epilogue: Tangy Chicken and Fruit Kabobs

That? Rocked. Seriously, one of the best I have read. And it also apparently turned me into a squeeing thirteen year old. Ryan/Pam never really interested me all that much, and probably still won't, but that was beautiful. The pairing and motives behind it were well thought out and believable, and other than Jim in the first part, the characters all stayed canon. I really enjoyed it, and wished I read it sooner.

Alyssa

Reviewer: Emmypie Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 09:13 pm Title: Epilogue: Tangy Chicken and Fruit Kabobs

loved it, and loved the harry potter reference. I was sad to see that one end too.

Reviewer: Shassafrass Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 08:37 pm Title: Epilogue: Tangy Chicken and Fruit Kabobs

Thank you for writing this. It was marvelous.

Reviewer: luchy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 07:57 pm Title: Epilogue: Tangy Chicken and Fruit Kabobs

This was sooo good.  Thanks :)

 

Reviewer: shaebay Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 06:35 pm Title: Epilogue: Tangy Chicken and Fruit Kabobs

I like the ending, but you kind of spoil Harry and it's "happy" ending. Lucky I just finished it before reading this

Author's Response: Argh! Sorry, I meant to put a spoiler tag on the top and then zoned it. I'll do that right now.

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 06:33 pm Title: Epilogue: Tangy Chicken and Fruit Kabobs

Awww, lovely! The press release was so cute and creative. Great job with the story as a whole...you should be proud!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 05:18 pm Title: Epilogue: Tangy Chicken and Fruit Kabobs

I have a special place in my heart for a tribute to successful potty training. Oy.

Hooray for happily ever after.  And for the fact that moving on doesn't mean discarding everything that was valuable.  It makes you who you are. 

Reviewer: I Know This Much Is True Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 05:17 pm Title: Epilogue: Tangy Chicken and Fruit Kabobs

This epilogue is downright "SQUEE!" worthy. :) I think it might just be one of my favorite "far into the future" things that I've read! 

I loved this story. So much. :) Awesome job. 

Reviewer: questionforyou Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 05:17 pm Title: Epilogue: Tangy Chicken and Fruit Kabobs

Ahh! I, too, am really sorry to see this series end. I loved the creative way you divided each chapter as well as the completely believable Pam/Ryan dynamic. It was a very realistic love triangle and you handled it expertly. And I love that Ryan and Pam are able to still be friends and even work together. Also, maybe I'm a little nerdy, but I thought the names of Pam and Jim's daughters were adorable as well. Very good job and I look forward to reading your next project.

Reviewer: JRAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 11:34 pm Title: Yogurt Parfait, Cheese Fries and a Bag of French Onion Sun Chips

yay i'm so happy sheended up with Jim!!  I feel bad for ryan, but like he said, they both knew deep down it wasn't forever..

 

can't wait for the epilogue! 

Reviewer: sherlockelly Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 04:36 pm Title: Yogurt Parfait, Cheese Fries and a Bag of French Onion Sun Chips

I'm a little disappointed. I was rooting for Ryan.

I still think Jim was being a huge fucktard. ;)

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 02:09 pm Title: Yogurt Parfait, Cheese Fries and a Bag of French Onion Sun Chips

My heart was lodged in my throat when I read that Pam went to New York to see Ryan! As I was reading that, thinking that she chose Ryan, I realized just how much I was pulling for Jim in this story! I am such a sap. I loved the reference to Wicked and it really made sense when taken in context with the story as a whole. And I really loved the ending. So simple, so sweet, so them. Looking forward to the epilogue!

Reviewer: I Know This Much Is True Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 01:23 pm Title: Yogurt Parfait, Cheese Fries and a Bag of French Onion Sun Chips

EEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

As much as I loved her with Ryan in this story, I really wanted her to end up with Jim and I'm SO happy that she did! :)

Can't wait to read the epilogue! 

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