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Reviewer: officefreak Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 01:13 pm Title: Yogurt Parfait, Cheese Fries and a Bag of French Onion Sun Chips

I loved it! Even though I'm hardcore JAM, I almost got on the PRyan (or is it Ryam? LOL) train....great story!

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31, 2007 10:09 pm Title: Chicken Cacciatore and Food For Thought

Wowsa!

I just spent the night reading this story from beginning to Ch.14.  Amazing work.  I never thought I'd buy into a Pam/Ryan thing, but you got me.

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: officefreak Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2007 07:57 pm Title: Chicken Cacciatore and Food For Thought

That is so unfair to leave me hangin' like this....lol

Reviewer: Alamos Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2007 07:01 pm Title: Chicken Cacciatore and Food For Thought

I have been following this story since the beginning. I am Ryan/Pam fan, when it is written well, like it is here. I am a little sad that it is coming to end.

Reviewer: sweetbabyjim Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2007 06:54 pm Title: Chicken Cacciatore and Food For Thought

RYAN RYAN RYAN RYAN!!!!!!!!!!

or maybe JIM JIM JIM JIM!!!!!!!!!!!

I am glad you know where this is going because I am so confused for Pam!!!

In TV life Jim all the way, but in fic land...I am all about Ryan....I will be sad for this story to end....

I hope you write more Pam/Ryan fics...LOVE IT!!!!!!!

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2007 06:22 pm Title: Chicken Cacciatore and Food For Thought

What did she see? Mixed berries yogurt?! Haha. I am real interested to see where you go with this! I have no idea, but I can't wait!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2007 04:15 pm Title: Chicken Cacciatore and Food For Thought

GITC!  You did NOT just end it there.  And I hope I am wrong in how I am interpreting your author's notes... Oy.

Reviewer: JamFan Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 10:31 pm Title: Mixed Berry Yogurt

Yay! You have no idea how excited i was that you posted another chapter!

More, i cant wait! It's so interesting! It is so good!

Reviewer: phonefullofnickles Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 02:40 pm Title: Yogurt Parfait and Cheese Fries

A very good chapter, finally putting things back into perspective.  Of course Pam still loves Jim.  I think the very obvious and right choice will ALWAYS be Jim.  Hopefully you agree:-)

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 11:43 am Title: Mixed Berry Yogurt

I didn't think I'd like this story. Don't take that the wrong way! But I am not so much into the Pam/Ryan. But, this is really well-written. You've done such a good job turning Ryan into a sympathetic character. Yet none of it feels too far removed from the version of him on the show. Can't wait to see who Pam "chooses," but please, don't let her pull a Kelly Taylor and choose herself!

Reviewer: sweetbabyjim Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 11:31 am Title: Mixed Berry Yogurt

AHHH!!!!

I am loving this story.........I was pulling for Ryan (in ficland ONLY), but now I am torn...ok, I am still pulling for Ryan...I think....MORE MORE MORE

Reviewer: Daoust Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 10:55 am Title: Mixed Berry Yogurt

This has been a fantastic story all the way through. I have thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you for writing it. I can't wait for the last chapter.  I wonder who she'll choose...hmmmm?

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 08:47 am Title: Mixed Berry Yogurt

Just, wow.  I didn't think you could ramp up the tension any more, and then you did.  Pam's conversation with Jim just tore my heart out.  I cannot even imagine how hard it must be to try to be 'friends' with someone you have feelings for like that.  Pam needs time for a good long think.  But not until Jim gets another chance to kiss the hell out of her and seriously scramble her brain.

Reviewer: JRAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 06:34 am Title: Mixed Berry Yogurt

While I love Ryan, I'm still rooting for Jim and I can't wait to see who she finally chooses!  Great job!

Reviewer: officefreak Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 06:30 am Title: Mixed Berry Yogurt

Eeek!!!!! The suspense is killing me!

If you read in the papers that a girl has a stroke from waiting for a fic update, you'll know who it was. LMAO!

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26, 2007 11:51 pm Title: Yogurt Parfait and Cheese Fries

Ellipsises... are three dots.  Four at the end of a sentence....

Like the story otherwise.

Author's Response: Thanks! I get carried away sometimes.

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26, 2007 11:48 pm Title: Mixed Berry Yogurt

I miss the lighter tone of the earlier chapters, but I guess it needs a catharsis.  I trust that you won't disappoint.

Reviewer: sweetbabyjim Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2007 11:39 am Title: Tootsie Rolls, Cacahuates and Imaginary Cherry Cobbler

I am LOVING THIS STORY....

I love reading about Pam/Ryan.....they are by far my favorite fanfic couple. That being said, please do not break my heart!!!

Reviewer: officefreak Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2007 09:51 am Title: Chips, Veal, Happy Meals and a can of Coke

Wow, I'm actually getting on board with this Pryan thing...weird. LOL

Reviewer: Daoust Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2007 09:26 am Title: Crunchwrap

Pam Beesley, the queen of the relapse...

Great chapter, and great story. I'm glad I found this one again.   

 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2007 05:31 am Title: Tootsie Rolls, Cacahuates and Imaginary Cherry Cobbler

Wow.  Thanks for the update.  The Jim/Ryan interaction is really well done.   And the rest of this (Pam/Ryan) is just breaking my Jam-shipping heart.  Again, well done.

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2007 12:24 am Title: Tootsie Rolls, Cacahuates and Imaginary Cherry Cobbler

That's a fair bit moodier than the previous chapters...

Reviewer: questionforyou Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2007 08:27 am Title: Yogurt Parfait and Cheese Fries

This series has been one of my favorites for awhile now. I love how you organize the story in terms of snacks/meals, and I think the Ryan/Pam pairing is unexpected, yet really works and is very believable. You built it up well. I'm excited to see where this continues to go. Great work.

Reviewer: I Know This Much Is True Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 04:14 pm Title: Crunchwrap

I love this story so much! And I love that I'm constantly having (the same?) inner battle where I think, "Yes! Ryan! Yay Ryan!" and that quickly switches over to, "No! Jim! Jim's the one you want Pam! Go for Jim!" Haha. :)

Keep them coming!!! 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 05:51 am Title: Crunchwrap

"whatever the hell was in a Crunchwrap"  hee!

Wow -- that whole exchange between Jim & Pam.  Just amazing.  (Go Jim!) 

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