10 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2007 01:37 pm Title: A Bite of Burrito and a Beer
I am loving Ryan and Pam together (in fanfic ONLY)...PLEASE do not break his (Ryan's) heart....I am a BIG fan of fic that is Pam/Ryan based....it is VERY hard to find fic of them two....I love my JAM and I love my Jim, but only on the show.......
Have Pam tell Jim to fuck off and then have her run to Ryan :)
The story and the writing are GREAT!!!!!!!!!
Date: June 29, 2007 07:48 am Title: A Bite of Burrito and a Beer
Wow -- I'm really impressed that you have done some much with the 'blank slate' that is Ryan Howard, constructing his backstory, his motivations, his contempt for Jim. Damn you for making me feel for Ryan!
8 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2007 06:55 pm Title: Candy Bars in the Parking Lot
"He was so consumed with his own heartbreak that he had missed it when she had gone ahead and saved herself." Loved this line. And I love Ryan coming to appreciate Pam and Pam giving in to the kiss. And why is my print so big?
8 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2007 06:39 pm Title: Yogurt Parfait and Pepperoni Pizza
I like that Pam is excited about her new friendship with Ryan. She needs something to wrap her mind, heart and arms around instead of pining away for Jim. And if Jim gets a tad jealous, so much the better!
8 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2007 06:36 pm Title: Yogurt Parfait and Cheese Fries
I really enjoyed this. It's fun to see Ryan as a normal person, instead of the a$$ he is on the show.
Date: June 27, 2007 08:10 am Title: French Toast Slam and Moons Over My Hammy
Cliffhanger with the Jim call! Are you kidding me?!? [/Andy]
Love this part: "Just be careful, Pammy…you’ve got a lot of hearts in your hands"
Date: June 26, 2007 11:00 pm Title: French Toast Slam and Moons Over My Hammy
I like it. I really want to hear what Pam has to say to Jim..and what he has to say back.
I can not resist the love triangle espcially when both men's actions are understandable.
10 [Report This]Date: June 24, 2007 08:06 pm Title: Pizza at Cugino's
When Jim broke in to Ryan's IM conversation, that was just awesome. Everything about this fic is perfect. Jim is so angsty.
Date: June 24, 2007 03:35 am Title: Pizza at Cugino's
Oh, Jim, you are breaking my heart all over again! That was unexpected. I like the exploration of Ryan's growing attachment to Pam in this chapter.
Date: June 19, 2007 11:52 am Title: Kung Pao Chicken and Neopolitan Ice Cream
This story is completely adorable. Kudos on writing a sweet Pam/Ryan that is actually perfectly believable. I look forward to the next chapter!
Date: June 16, 2007 06:29 pm Title: Kung Pao Chicken and Neopolitan Ice Cream
I love this story. I never thought I could like any pairing but Jim & Pam (and I still secretly ...shh... want them together), but this is great. I even like Ryan! Which is good cuz he is a real you know what on the show. More please!
9 [Report This]Date: June 16, 2007 06:22 pm Title: Kung Pao Chicken and Neopolitan Ice Cream
I don't know why I haven't read any of this until tonight, but I kind of hate myself for not reading it sooner!!
Great smut. ;)
Date: June 16, 2007 05:47 pm Title: Kung Pao Chicken and Neopolitan Ice Cream
Um, wow. I think I need some ice cream.
Poor Jim, doesn't know what he's missing. Plus y'all keep writing Ryan getting all the action. And secretly not being a jerk.
10 [Report This]Date: June 16, 2007 04:48 pm Title: Kung Pao Chicken and Neopolitan Ice Cream
kjhflkjszdhfclsakjdhf!!!!! FUCKING... FUCK!!!!
OMG, I both love and hate you right now. Love, for the obvious, hate for competely different reasons that have nothing to do with this fic and just... hi, I'm babbling because this is just... kjhfkjdshfldkjshahfkljdhsf!!!!
UGH!!! I wish I hadn't already favorited this because I want to do it again!
Date: June 10, 2007 02:48 am Title: Yogurt Parfait and Cheese Fries
I adore any and all Pam/Ryan pairings that people write, including yours :) Keep it up!!! I'm hooked :) Oh, and hot sex, btw ;)
Date: June 07, 2007 03:53 pm Title: Twix, Snapple, Yogurt Parfait
fucktard... HAHAHAHAHA.
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 03:25 pm Title: Twix, Snapple, Yogurt Parfait
Absolutely awesome writing here: Ryan could bet that Jim was about to say something pricky and totally emo and of course, Jim didn’t prove him wrong.
And here: Normally a question like this from a girl would have sent him bolting toward the door. There was no door here in the parking lot
Please don't feel bad about writing an unpopular pairing. It's not like the world needs one more story about Jim and Pam getting together.
Date: June 07, 2007 01:17 pm Title: Twix, Snapple, Yogurt Parfait
I love this story - please please please continue!
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 08:09 am Title: Twix, Snapple, Yogurt Parfait
HA HA HA! GO RYAN!!
This story is so much amazingness that I just can't even! Everytime it updates I squee.
And, hi, the sex is hot. MOOOOOOOORE!!! :D
Date: June 07, 2007 04:40 am Title: Twix, Snapple, Yogurt Parfait
Wow. Great chapter. Do you actually intend to have Jim redeem himself in this fanfic? Cause I think you'd need at least seven more chapters to do that believeably. Nice work, GITC.
Date: June 06, 2007 09:15 pm Title: Twix, Snapple, Yogurt Parfait
Somehow at the end of this chapter I feel a little sad for Ryan. It feels like Pam is using Ryan... BAD PAM! BAD PAM... Nonetheless, great story!
10 [Report This]Date: June 06, 2007 09:10 pm Title: Twix, Snapple, Yogurt Parfait
I think that it's scandalous that you've only gotten 18 reviews! This is the best story! I like Ryan/Pam. Don't let her break Ryan's heart! Keep going!
I'll try to be constructive....I like Free!Pam.
Date: June 03, 2007 08:09 pm Title: Chips, Veal, Happy Meals and a can of Coke
They broke apart in a fit of giggles when Creed walked him and told them the cleaning staff shouldn’t be doing things like that, but if they waited a while, he’d be available for a three-way.
By far my favorite part of the chapter. I have to admit that letting go of my JAM shipper status for this has been difficult, but I really really really love how you're writing Ryan (and Ryan/Pam)...I can't wait to see how it all turns out!
Date: June 03, 2007 05:35 pm Title: Chips, Veal, Happy Meals and a can of Coke
Hey. I just found this story, and I really like it. I'll admit that it took me about 4 chapters to actually get used to the mental image of Pam and somebody-other-than-Jim, but your writing style is very persuasive. Excellent work.
10 [Report This]Date: June 03, 2007 04:04 pm Title: Chips, Veal, Happy Meals and a can of Coke
This chapter makes me want to punch Jim in his fucktard face. >:(
MORE!!!!!