Date: May 08, 2007 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ha! This is a very original and fun concept. Can't wait to see where you go with it! Of course, the best thing would have been if Pam had not freaked, figured out what was going on right away, and milked the 'in bed with Jim' scenario for all it was worth... ;) But freaking is probably more believable. *sigh*
Date: May 07, 2007 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
well, you started the trend, so you should definately keep writing. i think you're doing a great job so far. you captured the chaos really well!
Author's Response: Thanks! Chaos is hard to capture in writing, I find, so I'm glad you thought so!
Author's Response: Actually though this is the first fic of this genre, I didn't come up with it all my own. I am a thief! An impatient thief!
Date: May 07, 2007 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love that she wakes up in Jim's bed. My one complaint? She was naked, but he was only shirtless! Darn, you can't even give poor Pam a view? And we know she wants to see his... whew, I'm saying a lot of things!
Good job; please do continue. And you may have written it quickly, but you also wrote it really well, so... win/win/win. (The last win is for the readers.)
He was naked, she just never got the opportunity to appreciate the view (I imagined him partially under the covers and Pam simply too flustered to notice anyway with the whole being Karen thing to take too much notice).
Thanks! I will try to continue, but I'm not sure I like Jim knowing... maybe they'll have to whack him on the head with a frying pan and convince him he did dream it!
Author's Response: Whoops too many too notices there.