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Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2007 11:54 am Title: Chapter 4: The Accident

i like this chapter, how he rushes to take care of her. so precious!

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2007 10:00 am Title: Chapter 4: The Accident

I liked this one.  A lot.  That's all I'm saying.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2007 06:44 am Title: Chapter 3: The Attempt

Great fic. I will keep thinking for a fantasy but so far the ones you wrote are great.

Reviewer: tigger Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2007 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 3: The Attempt

Your fic is the best one here in a while. I'm absolutely addicted.
The idea is very hot and very fun, definately something I've wanted to read for sometime. You've also written it very well. The language is not over the top, not too detailed or artsy-fartsy as sadly some fics' is; to be fair I almost didn't "see" the language while reading - it was that natural and well-written.
Basically, a big thank you - for a great idea that was superbly developed.
Can't wait for the updates, and more work from you.


Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much for all of the compliments! I am extremely flattered and very glad that you are so pleased! :D 

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2007 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Tease

Dang. This is HOT! Keep going!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2007 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Tease

nice dialogue/email.  I have no suggestions at this point, but I am enjoying what you've done so far.

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2007 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Tease

Wow!
They should have descret online sex in the middle of the office.
Hot for us readers, hilariously uncomfortable with the other people in the office....
just a suggestion...

Reviewer: JRAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2007 10:24 am Title: Chapter 2: The Tease

HAAAaaaa!  This is great, I can't believe she actually wore knee socks to the office...I agree with keeping up the little teasing bits for awhile, I think it could be fun to see how many times Jim can spit water all over himself :o)

 

 

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2007 05:55 am Title: Chapter 1: The First Initiation

Oh definitely further fantasies and more back and forth emailing or IM. I love how Pam is pushing him.

Reviewer: DayDreamBeliever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2007 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: The First Initiation

i can think of a lot of suggestions....which scares me a little.  who knew i could come up with random stuff like that so quickly? so in spite of my fear that i will sound utterly sex crazed and also the fear that these are completly cliche:

Jim's Possible Fantasies:
1. The roof - during the day
2. Dwight's Desk (the ultimate prank even though he shies away from putting anything to do with Dwight into a sexual situation)
3. Nurses - they care
4. Watching Pam paint

Pam's Fantasies:
1. Drawing Jim in the nude - for purely altruistic reasons of course ;-)
2. Phone sex/instant messenger sex at the office during work hours
3. Boys in uniform (aka military as opposed to like postal worker...or student)
4. Jim after playing basketball - she was inspired after the game between the office and the warehouse, sweaty jim was so much more appealing than sweaty roy
5. Surprising Jim in Stamford
6. Coming home to find Jim waiting for her after he'd moved to Stamford



Author's Response:

All wonderful suggestions! :D Thank you!

I'm really trying to think of some good ones for Pam. Probably because female fantasies are so much different from the typical "male" fantasies. But I really liked some of the suggestions that you made! 

Thanks again for the comment! 

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2007 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: The First Initiation

Hee! I love this concept. My idea would be to have her dress like a schoolgirl for the last chapter -- but for her to keep asking questions and enacting small things - like not wearing underwear, or wearing a garter belt (his fantasy could be imagining what is under her skirt, and she gives him tantalising little peeks)...her fantasy could be running her fingers through the hair on the back of his neck, so he teases her by doing it in front of her...or she could have a fantasy about him ravishing her on her desk, so he teases her by brushing across her as she leans over her desk, talking to Michael...

I would build up the tension with smaller acts, before getting to the whole enchilada -- but that's just me.

However you decide to continue, I'll be reading! 



Author's Response:

I LOVE all of those ideas! They're all gold! :) 

Thanks and keep reading!! 

Reviewer: bufffy6 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2007 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 1: The First Initiation

YES! jam + fantasies + email banter = GOLD

continue, continue!

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2007 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 1: The First Initiation

reinact it out, jim!! reinact it!!

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