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Reviewer: Stilla Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2007 08:59 pm Title: Fire and Water

I LOVE that: the person he always wished she would consistently be. Oh, how we wish that of ourselves, and our most beloved ones, so often.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2007 08:59 pm Title: Fire and Water

This is great and so much fun to read.  I do hope you continue!

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2007 07:47 am Title: Inspirational Post-It Notes

woah! toby steppin it up... i kinda can't believe he said that. good job. great chapter. kelly and her never ending naive self centeredness... oh i love it. 

Reviewer: the_squirrel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2007 08:58 pm Title: Inspirational Post-It Notes

omg! i was truely shocked when she just says "im in love with jim halpert." holy crap! that was so amazing. i am totally looking forward to seeing where this goes

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2007 03:34 pm Title: Fire and Water

I love that Pam found Andy.  Her reaction and then his, are great.  And he doesn't seem to realize Angela's misinterpretation was sandwich.  I mean, sabotage.  I love "if he’s ever hers again", and really, just everything after it.

Good, good, good.  If you decide to continue, I will read. 

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2007 12:50 pm Title: Fire and Water

write more! there, that;s my thought. ^_^

Reviewer: dundermifflin_thisispam Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2007 10:36 pm Title: Fire and Water

Excellent writing. I adore literal metaphors. :) Please keep adding, it's a great start.

Reviewer: jezziebeth Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2007 02:32 pm Title: Fire and Water

Nice beginning! Please continue.

Reviewer: notatoy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2007 12:41 pm Title: Fire and Water

Oh wow - I love this.  It's an amazing end, but I hope that this is not what is planned for the show!  Still, really well done!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2007 08:40 am Title: Fire and Water

He recognizes her, the person he always wished she would consistently be. He smiles ruefully, because he’s never seen her like this without him.

Wow, this is really intensely good. I love that Pam gets to be the hero for Andy, that the "real" Pam is here to stay, with everything extraneous burned away. These two still have a long way to go, but I'm so happy right now. Thanks for adding to the afterglow!

Reviewer: emmyred Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2007 04:38 am Title: Fire and Water

Please continue (and soon)!    I agree that the scene with Andy was perfect.  Love it!

Reviewer: Jaman Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2007 11:04 pm Title: Fire and Water

Oh, I loved this. The little scene with Andy was perfect. Poor guy, stuck out there, but I could see him laughing with Pam at the situation (and not only because he's AWESOME at fitting in : P )

Reviewer: WingWoman Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2007 10:34 pm Title: Fire and Water

I LOVE that Pam found Andy.  That should have been the last little segment of the show.

 And the last line was amazing.  Definitely one that needs a continuation! =)

Reviewer: PixieGrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2007 10:32 pm Title: Fire and Water

YaY. Please continue. we finally got some Jammy Happiness. We've gotta milk it for all it's worth.

Reviewer: maryuc Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2007 10:22 pm Title: Fire and Water

very good - i like how you write pam so strong - please continue!

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