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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 04:23 pm Title: Conversations

Wow, what a great story! I'd love it if you continue it, but it does stand on its own too.  Very nicely done!!!

Reviewer: amy_hates_greenbeans Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2007 10:42 pm Title: Conversations

ahhh!!! this is the cutest thing ever. I say continue it!!

Reviewer: Vaughnlove Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2007 09:12 pm Title: Conversations

That was awesome!! Please keep going!!!

Reviewer: kitesflyhigher Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2007 12:31 pm Title: Conversations

I love this story!  Please update soon.  I can't wait for more.  And, I think you do a really good job in capturing all the characters and what not.  It all just feels very real.  Good job!

Reviewer: notatoy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2007 10:05 am Title: Conversations

One shot please - it's really well done. 

Also, and I don't want this to come off as condescending at all, but I cannot believe you are in high school.  I wish I had this kind of skill and was able to analyze and create character situations like this when I was in high school - I don't even have it today! Thank you!

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2007 07:42 am Title: Conversations

You could end it there, because it does work well as a one shot..But I'm enjoying this fic too much to actually want to see it end..So let continue on!!! :)

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2007 03:20 am Title: Conversations

This was very well written and I think it ended on a perfect note.  I hope something similar happens on Thursday!

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2007 11:49 pm Title: Conversations

This is SO true:

"She was my best friend, okay?  She knows me better than anybody-"  He misses the glare Karen throws him at that comment.  "-and I miss the guy I used to be when we were friends."

I love that Jim says that, because I think that's what we're all thinking.

And KILLER last line.  You know, as much as I love this story and I'd like to see more, I think it wraps up really nicely in just one chapter.  But I'm certainly not gonna complain if you write more.  :) 

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2007 10:07 pm Title: Conversations

seriously the best post BG story for me, yet! I loved so much about this. Jim deciding mid-interview that he'd had enough of being a pod, not putting up with any shit-talking from Karen re: Pam, but also not being completley insensitve to Karen either. Then of course the scene in the stairwell was awesome. Thank you so much for this! I've been looking for something like this since Thursday!

Reviewer: jillyree Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2007 09:57 pm Title: Conversations

This was a wonderful read, and works as a wonderful oneshot.  However, I'd love to read a follow-up.

 

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2007 09:43 pm Title: Conversations

You're in high school?  You don't write like it.  It amazes me that you can write a believable high-powered interview as well as believable conversation between 20-somethings.  I don't think anyone would know your age by reading this.  There are many younger authors who give themselves away immediately; you don't give yourself away at all.  Kudos. 

This story is excellent.  If you have ideas on where you want to go with it, please continue.  It was a pleasure to read.

Reviewer: JRAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2007 09:42 pm Title: Conversations

Awesome take on the situation...I can only hope that the real deal pans out this way...can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Britley Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2007 08:51 pm Title: Conversations

Oh my goodness, je l'aime beaucoup. Awesome. Very believable.

Reviewer: jinx Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2007 08:50 pm Title: Conversations

Very well written JAMsoundtrsck.  I'd like to see you continue with the story.

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2007 08:23 pm Title: Conversations

I kindof like it as a one-shot, I will admit. Good job!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2007 07:26 pm Title: Conversations

Wow -- you're in high school?  This is quite well done.  This is an important point: "I thought you understood that if we both interviewed for the job, only one of us would get it."  So, I'm waiting to see how this is resolved, too. 

I think this is complete as is, but you should definitely continue to write other things! 

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2007 07:26 pm Title: Conversations

Nice.  I vote oneshot.  Maybe see what happens thursday. 

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2007 07:24 pm Title: Conversations

I think this is great as is, Jim finally seeming to come to terms with who he is, and figuring out what he wants in life and why. And I think that's a nice note to leave Jim and Pam on, but if you chose to continue, that'd probably be cool too!

Reviewer: mista f Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2007 07:22 pm Title: Conversations

oh, i do love the way this turned out!

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2007 07:11 pm Title: Conversations

This was great!  I love how it ended on a hopeful note.  You can always continue, but I also think it's a great one-shot.

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