10 [Report This]Date: May 15, 2007 12:21 pm Title: The Annual Bar-B-Que
LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED it!! michael throwing a pam-preciation party? sooo great, because it hasn't been done in fanfic yet, and i could definitely see it happening on the show. and jim's post it note? yeah, that's gonna keep a smile on my face for at least 2 days.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad I put a smile on your face. Your review has certainly done that for me!
Date: May 15, 2007 12:12 pm Title: The Annual Bar-B-Que
No, one more chapter! Pretty please?
That sticky note was amazing btw :) Great work as usual!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the sticky. It honestly just came out of nowhere and I wasn't sure it would work. Thanks for your comments.
9 [Report This]Date: May 15, 2007 11:55 am Title: The Annual Bar-B-Que
Pam begins to think that maybe the only positive outcome of her speech will be Jim winning the award for top salesman.
What a wonderful, wry little detail. It's exactly the kind of low-key, funny thing Pam would say in a TH. I think this is adorable. Feel free to bring on the fluff at your leisure.
Author's Response: I shall bring the fluff. Thanks for picking up on that little bit. I always appreciate your comments.
10 [Report This]Date: May 14, 2007 08:08 pm Title: Being written off the show......
“In the soap-opera that is my life….Jim will ultimately choose you. It won’t matter if you’ve been married six times, lost your memory, come back from the dead or gained an evil twin. We could have some good years…maybe even a lot of them, but at some point, he’s going to wish that he had chosen you. I just figure that it will hurt a hell of a lot less now then somewhere down the road. I told you, I’m doing this for me. And you know Jim….he won’t want to think that he’s hurt me by choosing you over me. That will eat him up too and he’s already a shell. That’s why I’m going to leave on my terms….my way.” Karen starts to get up. She brushes off her backside and fishes for her car keys in her sweatshirt pocket. “I probably won’t be in to work tomorrow…I don’t know if I’ll be back.”
God, I'm such a dork that I get all the references. I watch too much Days as a guilty pleasure.
Author's Response: Guilty pleasures are the best kind!
10 [Report This]Date: May 14, 2007 08:04 pm Title: The Other Woman
...so are the days of our lives.
Author's Response: So they are!
10 [Report This]Date: May 14, 2007 05:34 pm Title: The Other Woman
Two words:
1st-LOVE
2nd-MORE!!!
Author's Response:
Two Words:
Thank
You!
Date: May 14, 2007 04:13 pm Title: The Confrontation
I'm really impressed with your writing. This is terrific so far. Love the way you write Karen and Pam, and their dialog. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words!
10 [Report This]Date: May 14, 2007 03:59 pm Title: The Confrontation
Terrific, really enjoyed this.
Author's Response: Thanks!
8 [Report This]Date: May 14, 2007 02:46 pm Title: The Confrontation
This is a really novel idea. To be honest, Pam and Karen talking things over never occurred to me, but it's a great idea. I'm enjoying reading this!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm so glad you are enjoying it.
Date: May 14, 2007 02:33 pm Title: The Other Woman
whoa -- this would work too! See, GD, there are a zillion good ways to get Karen out of the picture and give us Jam -- pick one already!!! (p.s. nicely written Pam & Karen here, BTW)
Author's Response: Thanks! As much as I'd like to see her character developed more....I want her gone too.
Date: May 14, 2007 01:59 pm Title: The Other Woman
I am eating up this story with a spoon. Great voices, and I really like the way you're showing Karen here. The relationships among the three of them are complex, which is what makes them so fascinating, and I love that you're doing them full justice. I can't wait for more! (And I'm also thrilled that you're posting these so quickly--I hope you can continue the pace.)
Author's Response: Thanks so much Inanna. I really appreciate your feedback. I've slowed down a little on these, but I'll do what I can to keep it up. I'm a teacher and it's tradition here that my history students watch Glory at the end of the year, so I'm bored out of my skull. Glad I have the writing to keep me from nodding off.
10 [Report This]Date: May 14, 2007 01:29 pm Title: Catfight in the Powder Room
How much do I love that Karen apparently watches the same soaps that I do? Hee.
This is gorgeous. I love reasonable Karen and brave Pam.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. I'm really liking this Karen and this Pam too. Honestly, I haven't watched soaps in years and the one I did watch...I wasn't sure if people would understand Reva and Josh.
Date: May 14, 2007 01:03 pm Title: Catfight in the Powder Room
Great response by Pam
Author's Response: Thanks!!!
10 [Report This]Date: May 14, 2007 11:54 am Title: The Confrontation
Yes! Karen who isn't a witch in fanfiction! Love it. ;D
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it!
Date: May 14, 2007 11:41 am Title: The Confrontation
that's really great, and in my opinion exactly what karen should do. After watching Jim's face during Pam's confession it's obvious that Something is not over...I'd want to know all the facts too...
Bravo...don't stop till we get enough
Author's Response: I really think Karen would want to know what is going on and I think she probably realizes....after the half-truths he's told her, that Jim probably isn't the guy to ask. Thanks so much for your comments!
Date: May 14, 2007 08:44 am Title: The Confrontation
What Karen has to tell her will probably hurt, but hey…..tonight she’s already walked through fire. Woo! Yeah, I love this. It's a cliffhanger, but although I'd love to hear what comes next, I don't need to. The important thing here is Pam and who she has become. I love her plan for keeping her mind occupied on the bus, too. Fabulous. Love the details here. You really do a great job inhabiting our girl Pam.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I think I've had your comment in my head as I've been writing this, wondering if I've taken it too far or not far enough so I've become very aware of that. So...awesome feedback. Glad you think I've done okay with Pam.