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Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2007 08:59 am Title: Chapter 1

Ooho, these are great! Karen's sounds spot-on (Go, Pudge!), and Roy's is exactly right, too. Andy's made me laugh and feel sad. Poor Andy. Hee.



Author's Response: Andy is such a sympathetic figure.  The greatest story of tragedy in our time.  Or not.

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2007 05:38 am Title: Chapter 1

It took me a minute to figure out what was wrong with Andy.  Then I started laughing.  Nice work.

Author's Response: Thanks.  I'm working under the assumption that they just don't care about him enough to rescue him as he floats out to sea... er... lake...

Reviewer: janelle Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2007 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

Funny and sad at the same time.  Roy's last line really made me laugh :-)

Author's Response:

Not only did the Flyers finish last in the NHL this year, but they didn't even win the draft lottery.

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