Date: May 11, 2010 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! What is he apologizing for? Is it that once he has her he realizes he doesn't want her? This is so deep I don't get it. I like it, but I don't understand it.
10 [Report This]Date: December 06, 2008 12:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, you have written smut with a dark quality to it that I have never read here before. I liked it. It surprized me. Very smoldering and yet with a twinge of sadness. Really good writting! Thanks
Date: July 24, 2008 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
So hot. You wrote both the emotions and the sex really well. Although, my one complaint is the idea of Pam giggling while Jim is totally into it seems awkward and disjointed with the emotions of the scene. Otherwise, very well done.
8 [Report This]Date: June 24, 2007 06:33 am Title: Chapter 1
i need a cold shower
7 [Report This]Date: May 21, 2007 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. This was hot and steamy and verrry nice!
Date: May 15, 2007 06:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Very nice. I guess in school you didn't have Jim/pam to think about.
Date: May 14, 2007 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I can't tell you how much I loved this. I loved his insecurity and how he doesn't want Pam to be his rebound girl and how much he wants her and how sweet the ending is...did I mention I loved ALL of it?