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Reviewer: smith34 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2018 11:26 pm Title: The closer I get to you

Another fanfic which seems to think Jim started at DM first. In the show they mention her warning Jim about Dwight on his first day.

Reviewer: Newtruefan Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 26, 2010 02:57 pm Title: To the place where I belong

Wow! This was great! It turned out to be AU but in one of the best possible ways. I especially like how Jim and Pam can fight and no one think they're going to break up. That's a real relationship and you drew it perfectly. And the surprise wedding - excellent! Kudos!

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31, 2008 06:25 pm Title: So I'm going home

Cuteness!

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31, 2008 06:24 pm Title: Cause you might just get it all

This is the sweetest most fluffiest story!

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31, 2008 06:21 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For

*happy sigh*

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31, 2008 05:37 pm Title: Feeling good don't ever cost a thing

Aww!! That "last first date" line was really sweet.

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31, 2008 05:30 pm Title: You always seem to give me another try

Aww, adorable!

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31, 2008 05:24 pm Title: The closer I get to you

LOL cute flashback.

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31, 2008 05:00 pm Title: I've not always been the best man or friend for you

Angry!Karen always makes me uncomfortable. Eeek.

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31, 2008 04:58 pm Title: I don't regret this life I chose for me

Aw, I do feel bad for Karen.

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31, 2008 04:57 pm Title: To the place where I belong

Starting a new one -- love Jim's moment of revelation.

Reviewer: grayk Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03, 2007 11:45 pm Title: So I'm going home

i love it!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 02, 2007 12:42 pm Title: So I'm going home

Awww, what a sweet last chapter. I do hope that Pam and Jim fight and have a "normal" relationship on the show, and they don't just break them up. Anyway, great story all around - well done!!

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02, 2007 12:17 am Title: Be Careful What You Wish For

Wow. I really liked how you had Pam lay it all out on the line. They both finally got what needed to be said out there. Hopefully this will pave the way to their happiness.

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02, 2007 12:12 am Title: I've not always been the best man or friend for you

Great story so far. Truth and honesty is what we finally need to get this togerther.

Reviewer: jinx Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2007 10:35 pm Title: So I'm going home

Fluff is required every once in awhile. There's a nice balance with reality in this final chapter. I like the idea of Pam and Jim eloping.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2007 07:52 pm Title: So I'm going home

Oh, very nice!  I like your little list of fights, and Karen working at Staples, and of course "The Halperts"!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2007 07:45 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For

Wow!  Lots of good discussion and air-clearing here!  Ooh, and getting out of here... niiice.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2007 07:40 pm Title: Feeling good don't ever cost a thing

This is just lovely.

A box of chocolates seemed cliché.  Hey, hey, hey!  Never underestimate the importance and meaning of chocolates.  Mmmm, chocolates!  Sorry, what was the question? 

I loved this line: "Tonight was a threshold that she thought she would never get to cross."  I love this line "Suddenly he was on top of her, her face cradled in his hands, his lips on hers before she could react.", and it gives me the impression of Pam being this incredibly powerful magnet, like a supermagnet, and he's just... woosh... drawn against her.  (Swoon.)   

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2007 06:47 pm Title: So I'm going home

I loved this story. Especially their wedding on the beach...if I had it to do again, mine would be just like that. You did a great job describing the scene, and I loved their one-line message to Phyllis. And the reasons for the fights were totally realistic too.

I went to school in Cincy and keep trying to imagine where Jim and Pam were, leaning against that iron fence. :D

Great job, agd300! Can't wait to see what you write for us next!

Reviewer: big haircut Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2007 06:41 pm Title: To the place where I belong

what a sweet ending! I can just imagine Michael tearing up at the end, he's a big softie really and has been advising Jim all along. It really is an endearing quality in Michael. I like that you included the fights too, it made the story seem more grounded than most Jam fluff, which made the ending all the more rewarding!

Reviewer: BeckySue Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2007 01:02 pm Title: So I'm going home

Cute ending! Good job and thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2007 07:34 am Title: To the place where I belong

Very nice update.  I think everything that was said needed to be.  Now they can move on and have some "fun"!!!

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2007 04:06 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For

very well written with believable dialogue. - thanks

Reviewer: receptionist Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2007 08:29 pm Title: Feeling good don't ever cost a thing

I was SO giddy while reading this... it was great, really!  I loved the part with Phyllis, and the camera guy--nice twist!  I LOVED it!  Keep writing!

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