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Reviewer: FancyNewBeesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2007 07:37 pm Title: Chapter One: If I Say So Myself

Hey! I have been reading Jim and Pam "first date" fics obsessively ever since Thursday, and this is definitely one of the best! I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 11:19 pm Title: Chapter One: If I Say So Myself

That was very cute.  I think you did a good job.  The pace of your dialogue was very good.  You had a few verb tense switches and some little things like "Giving him a disdaining look" (it should be disdainful look), but those were small things.  well done.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 07:54 pm Title: Chapter One: If I Say So Myself

"And she's not my girlfriend anymore so you'd have to ask her yourself I guess." - best line ever!!  I'm really enjoying this and can't wait until the next chapter.  Please update soon!

Reviewer: PhatHalpert Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 07:37 pm Title: Chapter One: If I Say So Myself

That was adorable.  I'm really enjoying these post-finale stories, especially when they continue right after the end of the episode.  I was trying to imagine what would happen after Pam left the conference room and I really enjoy your version :).

Reviewer: Ren Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 06:26 pm Title: Chapter One: If I Say So Myself

Ah well done.

This made me way excited for season 4 now. Ahh well at least with stories like these I'll survive.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 01:05 pm Title: Chapter One: If I Say So Myself

Awww!  Nice.  I love "my playas in da house of Scott" - very Michael.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 12:51 pm Title: Chapter One: If I Say So Myself

Really cute, believable scenario! I got thrown a little bit with the switches between past and present tense, though- maybe next time a beta reader could help you smooth that out. I love their conversation, though. Nice job!

Reviewer: PamHeartJim Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 07:41 am Title: Chapter One: If I Say So Myself

Happy sighs :)  This is great :)  I love all these aftermath fics... the ones with tension and the ones like this where they just have an understanding and are just so happy right away.  Thanks for my morning fix of JAM. lol

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2007 01:39 am Title: Chapter One: If I Say So Myself

Oh gosh! I was waiting for someone to do a post-talking head fic! I loved it so much! Thanks!

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2007 08:29 pm Title: Chapter One: If I Say So Myself

Lovely; can't wait for more!

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