10 [Report This]Date: December 03, 2007 04:19 am Title: Chapter 1
heheh. go find your inner dwarf.
Date: May 23, 2007 09:54 am Title: Chapter 6
Aww! Clown day is just priceless. And Karen and Toby dressed alike. Nice.
Author's Response: Couldn't you just see Dwight dressed as a sad clown in camo? With Karen and Toby I might be putting a square peg in a round hole, but both characters need somebody to make them see the good parts of life. Just a thought. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: May 21, 2007 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
I really like that Jim comes to an art show and gets it!
Author's Response: Sappy I know, but I enjoyed writing it. Thanks for reviewing
Date: May 21, 2007 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
How nice! The line about breathing like a frog is really funny. I like the Toby/Karen dynamic, and Pam's line about letting her know when he doesn't feel like an ass. Also, how only Jim has no trouble sleeping!
Date: May 20, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok, I REALLY love this. The characterizations are great, and the story is moving along nicely. So, in short - yay! great story.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the kind words!
Date: May 20, 2007 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
"She wondered if Kelly could breathe through her skin like a frog." - I think you may have stumbled upon the explanation! So simple, yet so brilliant!
Author's Response: Not only can she breathe through her skin, she also has jumping ability to put Kobe Bryant to shame.
8 [Report This]Date: May 20, 2007 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yay, sequel! So next we'll get clowns? Can't wait.
The hypnosis thing felt like a stretch, plot-wise--apparently I'm a skeptic about hypnosis, who knew?--but I loved where you went with it (the one thing he couldn't remember was "happy").
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought it was something of a stretch. But for some reason the seven dwarves got stuck in my head, and I couldn't think of happy to save myself. I thought it might be a good device to use in a Jim/Karen to Jim/Pam story and this was the best I could do
Date: May 20, 2007 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fun!!! Kelly the five-year-old is especially nice.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Kelly's voice is hard for me, so I'm glad you liked her.