Date: May 30, 2007 06:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice story. I like how you compare Jim bursting into the conference room with Pam's coal walk speech. They finally got their feelings out in words. Yay!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks, EverybodyHurts! Glad you liked it...and I second your "yay"!! :)
Date: May 26, 2007 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love how Jim admitted how excited he was - what a sweet and romantic thing to do.
Author's Response: Ohh, me too, kaystar! I was trying to think of what would happen if they did talk after that, when both of them were caught up in the moment. Thanks for reading!
Date: May 21, 2007 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very cute. I love that Jim came back to the room after the taping. And love Pam joking about her coal walk confession. Very well done.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much, flamingos! Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: May 21, 2007 07:21 am Title: Chapter 1
This is sweet and so appropriate to the sweet little moment we saw onscreen. "this is gonna be good!"
Author's Response: Aw, thanks very much, lisahoo! It's just a short little thing, but in my head it went nicely with that moment. Thanks for reading!
Date: May 21, 2007 03:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Lovely, sweet, quiet moment. I like that you kept it simple - in the tone of that scene. And their exchange in the last two lines pretty much sums up what most of us are feeling, I think. Gonna be good, indeed.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Colette! Gah, I can't wait to see what the REAL writers do with it.
Date: May 21, 2007 12:39 am Title: Chapter 1
That was a nice little moment between them. :) Indeed, it was so much that Pam had to stay put for a moment.
Author's Response: Thanks, MA! I just wanted to expand on that moment a little bit just for my own mind. :) Glad you liked it!