Date: May 27, 2007 04:38 pm Title: The Blind Leading the Blind
Let's see--what's the most cliche review I can give you?
"Wow. It was really good. Update soon."
Or how about...
"OMG! I luv it! U R the BEST! Update SOON!!!"
See, here's the thing, though...it's not a cliche if it's true. :) (More applause from the front row.)
Author's Response:
*Throws flowers into the front row*
Thanks so much, Mose! You know I couldn't have done this without you!
10 [Report This]Date: May 27, 2007 12:07 pm Title: The Blind Leading the Blind
You've topped chapter one, dear Sway, and I didn't think that was possible! I love the little subtleties you put in your work, and the last paragraph of this chapter is pure delight. It might sound cliche, but keep 'em coming!!! --CH
Author's Response: Always so quick to review, CH, I love it! Like I said, this story wouldn't even exist without your help, so thank you sooo much for all your help. And I'm so glad you liked the chapter! See you around our four mediums of communication ;)
Date: May 27, 2007 04:59 am Title: "My Way or the Highway"
Well, of COURSE I love it! You already know my feelings about this new idea of yours (as well as my insane jealousy that I didn't think of it first!), but I'll go ahead and say it again anyway. You're onto such a great idea here, and this is such a cute beginning. It's the little touches here that really make this work: the fact that the Halpert family dog doesn't like Pam; how exactly Pam knows about tiptoeing across creaky floors. Wonderful little spices that make this dish so delicious!
So good luck with this new endeavor, and here's a giant WOO HOO!! from the front row! :)
Author's Response:
Okay, your enthusiasm is turning people off...
Totally kidding! Becky215 and I were talking last night and she said that your reviews were as inspirational as sunday school (or something like that) and i couldn't agree more! Your support of this story means so much to me, and thanks for being so helpful in taking a first look at my drafts. A billion Stanley nickels for you, my friend :)
Date: May 26, 2007 08:59 pm Title: "My Way or the Highway"
Love it. Soooo sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 26, 2007 08:22 pm Title: "My Way or the Highway"
Superb...Flawless writing, realistic, and the I love you moment was great and so in character.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I thought the "I love you" moment might be too corny, but then I remembered the title of my story ;) Thanks again for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: May 26, 2007 08:14 pm Title: "My Way or the Highway"
I know this sounds cliche, and I know that saying it sounds cliche, sound cliche, but - this is the best thing since sliced bread.
What? Okay - it was the best cliche I could come up with that would fit here.
Seriously - I love this and it has so many possibilities! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! And I like that cliche, I may even have to use it! Thanks again for reading :)
Date: May 26, 2007 08:07 pm Title: "My Way or the Highway"
Aww. It's lovely! I especially liked him kissing her hand. Sometimes things are a cliché because they're good!
Author's Response: Indeed! I thought the gesture went well with his Prince Charming haircut ;) Thanks so much for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: May 26, 2007 07:52 pm Title: "My Way or the Highway"
Oh, lovely, Sway, simply lovely! You captured that moment when she says, "I love you" so perfectly, and I think it's breathtaking you you made her so willing to compromise after he said those simple words in return. A Dundie to you, Sway, for a wonderful start to what promises to be a fabulous story. I know it might sound cliche, but is there more where that came from? --CH
Author's Response: Thank you so much, my dear! I realized that I have to go back and thank you in my story notes for being not just a fabulous beta, but being fabulous in general. Thank you so much for all your support of this story, and there's plenty more where it came from! Can't thank you enough darlin :)