Reviews For Summer of Jam
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Reviewer: I Noticed The Stripes Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09, 2007 03:47 pm Title: Do Over

Kelly with another guy? A guy who calls Ryan "Big Turkey?" I'm intrigued...

Author's Response: I'm glad your intrigued. I'll have more coming eventually.

Reviewer: missmargaret Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2007 01:34 am Title: Do Over

KANDY!!!!

Okay, obviously I've been dosing myself up on dollsome's Kandy fics this week. But really, soooo excited!

 

I love that everyone from the office was actually nice to Ryan when he came back. So realistic. I mean, of course Michael will be Michael, but I'm glad to read a story that shows a more realistic scenario for Ryan's first big visit!

 

And the art show?? I'm so happy that Jim took that extra step to be there for Pam. He's got a lot of making up to do in S4.



Author's Response: Yeah I think some people might not respect his promotion, but I think in the end, they'd be gracious to him about it. Glad everyone likes the Kandy. I came up with the idea a while ago and was worried that everyone would think I was ripping Dollsome off. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2007 09:57 pm Title: Do Over

Oooh this was great! What a nice way to go back and cover the territory of the art show in a really sweet way. Also I think the relationship that you've carved out between Jim and Michael is RIGHT ON. This is the way I imagine them being if Jim were really his go-to guy. There was a line Jim said to Pam...about looking forward to getting high with Creed that CRACKED ME UP! Good stuff.

Author's Response:

It's always great to get a review from one of my favorite authors!

I've always loved Michael/Jim scenes, from Booze Cruise to Convention to Benihana. It's always fun to explore their relationship. Everytime I watch Business School, I want Jim to show up at the art show eventhough I've already seen it. I really wanted to do something to make up for that. 

Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2007 08:09 pm Title: Do Over

We're all going to be so disappointed if they don't have Kandy next season.  Maybe we should start a massive letter writing campaign or something to make sure.  Um... i'm not organizing that.  I've got a thesis to write.

Author's Response: Of course, if they do get together it will just be proof that Greg Daniels reads fanfic. 

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2007 12:18 pm Title: Welcome Back

Very cute. I love how Dwight caught them with his Light sabor as a real weapon. Too funny. Great job.

Author's Response: Wow! I'm glad that I still get readers for the early stuff. Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2007 10:20 am Title: Do Over

I love how Kandy is the new fanfic couple. Won't we all freak if they get toether come September? Looking foward to more of your story.

Author's Response: It just seems like they'd work so well together, doesn't it? Thanks for your comment!

Reviewer: downtown Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2007 09:20 am Title: Do Over

Kandy for the win!!! I literally gasped at the ending, then giggled. Great buildup! Looking forward to the next part.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! I loved writing that ending so I'm glad people enjoyed it.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2007 07:06 am Title: Do Over

OMG!  Did Kandy make it into the Summer of Jam?!?!  That. is. awesome.  (it's even a little bit of the 'Kelly's Revenge' challenge!!)

Author's Response: Thanks! Kandy is awesome and I can't wait to write some stuff with them.

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2007 06:14 am Title: Do Over

I liked this but I think more work happened in this chapter than happened all of last season.  And you missed a golden opportunity for a new Great Scott production.  I like the lack of drama with JAM and love the building drama with Ryan/Kelly/Andy.  That will be fun.

Author's Response: Don't worry. They'll get back to ignoring work shortly. Thanks for your comments!

Reviewer: tessa mae Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2007 09:47 pm Title: Kurt and Noelle and Jack and Pam

Tickle fight on the couch. God I hope they write that in next season! Actually, eff that. I just want to have a tickle fight with Jim. ;) Anywho, I am really enjoying this fic! Yay!

Author's Response: You have a tickle fight with Jim and I'll have one with Pam! I hope they write that in next season, too. Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2007 07:19 pm Title: Kurt and Noelle and Jack and Pam

I just love this premise. Angela and Pam in negotiations. lol. So much fun. Oh and the opening dream sequence - HILARIOUS.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! I really appreicate it.

Reviewer: hoLiday Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13, 2007 11:16 pm Title: Kurt and Noelle and Jack and Pam

This was a perfect chapter.  Like Cricket said, you captured everyone's voice.  I was really satisfied that you've stayed true to the show.  Reading the parts about Angela, I was really pleased because I could really imagine her saying all that she said.  In addition to the characters, the events occuring...It's all feasible and that's hard to find in a fanfic.  Fantastic job.  I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Wow, I appreciate that very much! I really enjoy writing this story.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 13, 2007 07:12 pm Title: Back to Work

"Maybe I should try girls for a while. Hey, you’re cute. Maybe we should go out?”  I love Kelly, and your Kelly is so dead on!  But what is Karen up to?

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! Karen's plans will be revealed eventually.

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 13, 2007 05:54 pm Title: Kurt and Noelle and Jack and Pam

What's not to love about this chapter.  A dirty Angela dream, detente betweem Jim and Dwight, even a Gloria Estefan reference thrown in for good measure.  Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! It was the most fun chapter to write so far.

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 13, 2007 05:53 pm Title: Kurt and Noelle and Jack and Pam

Oh dear.  Angela making Dwight wear the warehouse uniform while lusting after Roy?  Priceless.

And the Jim and Dwight uninteraction at the end was just perfect.



Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Cricket03 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13, 2007 03:17 pm Title: Kurt and Noelle and Jack and Pam

Thanks for updating! I've been following this story from the beginning, and absolutely love it. It's definitely helping to suppress those Summer Hiatus blues. I especially like the interactions between Angela/Dwight and Jim/Pam. You've also got everyone's voice, especially Jim's, down perfectly. I look forward to reading more soon!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you've enjoyed the series. Comments like this really give me the motivation to keep going with it. Thanks!

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2007 10:43 pm Title: Back to Work

oh no...what did Karen do...uh. 

LOVE the characterization of Kelly - so spot on. I especially loved that moment where Pam was like "didn't you say last week.......oh forget it." lmao. How quickly Kelly forgets. lol



Author's Response: Writing for Kelly is a blast. Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2007 08:36 pm Title: Back to Work

Larry, larry, larry, larry... Kelly?  *Sigh/chuckle*

Author's Response: Heh

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2007 07:45 pm Title: Toby's Dilemma

"That was supposed to be him kissing Pam" - how sad for Toby. (But how good for us!)

Author's Response: Indeed! I like Toby, but he'll have to find love somewhere else.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2007 07:42 pm Title: Welcome Back

Awesome chapter. I love that Jim picked the roof as the spot for their date - so romantic.  And Dwight in his underwear makes me wonder - boxers or briefs this time?

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I'll leave Dwight's underwear choice to everyone's imagination.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2007 07:23 pm Title: Back to Work

He always tried to diffuse any tension in his conversations by adding a joke at the end, but it always just seemed to make people think he was even crazier.  This is so true!!  Like "apology not accepted..."  I like how you boiled Andy's post-drywall self into this sentence.  Excellent.  Oh, my gosh, the rest of the stuff about Andy is hilarious!

Kelly's "threesome" cracked me up too.

This is a lot of fun.  But if I were Karen, I'd get out, too (at least I assume that's what she's doing). 

 

 



Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted to cover Andy a bit because not much fanfic has been written about him. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: hoLiday Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2007 11:32 pm Title: The Long Weekend

I was so happy to see a new chapter.  Well done.  =)


Author's Response: Thank You!

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2007 08:06 pm Title: The Long Weekend

I now solely love this story for the Ghostbuster's quote.  At least way too much for an adult person.  Let me insert a collective awwwww!  Well done.



Author's Response: Wow. Thanks for the comment! You can never love Ghostbusters too much.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2007 06:50 am Title: The Long Weekend

Nice!  I have to say that the Ghostbusters reference is my absolute favorite part, though!  (Are you the Key Master?)

I like that Pam changed her mind about going in (it's a woman's prerogative, right?)  I like Jim's "Must get more rooms" - funny!  



Author's Response:

I'm the gatekeeper! Thanks for the comment!

(And yes, it is a woman's prerogative, especially if she's just been handed a year and a half old declaration of love.)

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 08:31 pm Title: The Long Weekend

Hmmm... I think there may be some people a little miffed at your complete glossing over of steamy bits.  Brilliantly glossed over, in fact.  I think even network censors from the '60s would miss that.

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