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Reviewer: lemonade Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2007 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 31-An Office Betrothal

Love it! Great job, Post-it Thief!

Reviewer: officerules06 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2007 09:44 am Title: Chapter 30 - The Climax by Vampiric Blood

LOVE IT!!! you really did your research! i love everything they did & love that they got engaged on their 3-mth anniversary! i want to see that in S4! great job!

Reviewer: lemonade Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20, 2007 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Date, by Brian

Wow, VB you did such a great job! You put a lot of work into this. I love how set this whole thing up. Way to represent for NA!

Reviewer: Post_it_Thief Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20, 2007 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 30 - The Climax by Vampiric Blood

Committed to commitment? I love that.

Great job again, VB. So cute! I'm going to be incredibly disappointed when the season starts and they aren't getting married on Christmas Eve. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, again, Post-it_Thief!  Committed to commitment is something I've really said for years.  It was how I explained why some of my engaged couples friends split up ... they WEREN'T committed to the commitment.  I think Pam & Jim will be!  Yay.

Thanks, too, Lemonade for your kind words.  You posted your comment on Brian's chapter 1, so I can't respond there.

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2007 08:16 am Title: Chapter 30 - The Climax by Vampiric Blood

What a wonderful day they had for their anniversary!  I like the spot where Jim proposed, very romantic.  You did a really nice job with this chapter, so the lack of sleep paid off. :)

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!  And now we leave for Virginia Beach ... I fear my husband will have to do all the driving!  I'm just glad I got it up before we left.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2007 06:52 am Title: Chapter 30 - The Climax by Vampiric Blood

I LOVE IT! I wish I could be more eloquent, but alas, I cannot ;)

Author's Response: Well thank you for taking the time to say you love it.  I appreciate it!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 29 - What You See by Vampiric Blood

Just started reading this series, but I'm loving this! Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words!  We've all really enjoyed writing this.  It was all Brian's idea!

Reviewer: Post_it_Thief Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 29 - What You See by Vampiric Blood

VB, you're doing such an excellent job with these chapters! Great descriptions and fun dialogue. Can't wait to read the rest!

Author's Response:

Thanks, PiT!  I was a little nervous because there was no feedback at first.  I thought maybe it was going too slowly and everybody was b-o-r-e-d.

Reviewer: officerules06 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 29 - What You See by Vampiric Blood

love it! very good - i'm so glad y'all chose to write about their 3-mth anniversary!

Author's Response: Thanks!  I've had this in mind for a long while.  I procrastinated too long – I'd hoped to have the whole date posted on Friday.  But it's still fun to write.  The last chapter (just one more, I think) should be up soon.

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 29 - What You See by Vampiric Blood

I just wanted to jump in finally and thank all of you for writing this series.  I read it at the beginning and now I've gotten back into it, and it's just wonderful.  It's amazing to imagine that Jim and Pam have been dating for 3 months.  Yay!  I'm enjoying how realistic you are making this.  Looking foward to more!

Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 29 - What You See by Vampiric Blood

Born and raised in Philly, this is a sentimental favorite for me--fun to envision our favorite pair walking the streets : )  Great job.  Can't wait to see where you go with it.

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot.  Hope to get the rest of the date done soon … You may love the dinner & drinks! 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 29 - What You See by Vampiric Blood

Wow -- the 3 month anniversary just gets better and better!  This is one of my favorite lines: Jim was a master at loving her and she was still an apprentice.

*sigh* 



Author's Response: Thanks so much!  And I do think that's true about Jim.  He takes loving someone and makes an art of it.

Reviewer: Abigail Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2007 11:30 am Title: Chapter 28 - Anniversary Celebration by Vampiric Blood

Hopefully, I'll get the rest of the date posted tonight! Please do!  This was so sweet!  Happy 3 Months Jim and Pam! <3

Author's Response: Thanks for the nice comment!  I don't have much written yet but it's all in my head.  I'll really try...

Reviewer: FashionShow Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 08:33 am Title: Chapter 27 - Parent Trap, by Jake

I almost never come out of hiding to comment (I know, I'm awful!) but, I am desperate for an update!!  Do you think there will be more added soon??? :)  Pretty please with sugar on top!!

Reviewer: Ceciel Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2007 02:00 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Date, by Brian

A big fat humongous compliment to you all, very very well done! Thank you.

Reviewer: EttaFitz Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2007 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Date, by Brian

I have thoroughly enjoyed this whole series. I read it from beginning to end one night and became sick because I didn't get enough sleep before work - it was THAT GOOD!!!

PLEASE - WRITE MORE!?!?!?! ;D

Reviewer: collardgreens Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Parent Trap, by Jake

heehee that was real cute. I love seeing jim squirm.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2007 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Date, by Brian

I don't know how I missed all 27 chapters of this but after reading the first chapter I'm hooked and probably won't go to sleep tonight until I'm done.  I really enjoyed their first date - and I loved this line - "Despite having so much to hash out, neither tip-toed around anything, whether it was Roy and Karen or the thousand hopeful moments since he’d returned to Scranton that had ended with words unspoken and opportunities missed." 

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2007 10:10 am Title: Chapter 27 - Parent Trap, by Jake

That was too cute. Loved it.

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2007 07:40 am Title: Chapter 27 - Parent Trap, by Jake

Haha. I was terrified for Jim at first!

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2007 06:38 am Title: Chapter 27 - Parent Trap, by Jake

HAHA! I almost died about the "relations out of wedlock thing." That was amazing. Great job.

Reviewer: Daoust Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26, 2007 04:51 am Title: Chapter 26 - Worth the Wait, by call of duty

Really lovely chapter.  A nice read.  Thanks.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2007 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 25: From the Mixed-Up Files of Ms Pamela E. Beesly

Hey, LinuxLinus!  I really like what you did with Amanda!  She's a bit more of a terror than I thought when I dreamed her up.  I really enjoy your writing style.

 

Only thing though ... Nate's a BAND teacher, not a science teacher!



Author's Response: Oops. I'll fix that tonight.

Reviewer: rakerpation Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19, 2007 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Lazy Days That End Well, by Brian

I really enjoyed this newest addition to the story!  It's great how well the round robin is working. 

 btw, Brian, do you write under another name on here?  I particularly like your writing style.  :-)



Author's Response: That's kind of you to say. Thanks. No, I don't have any stories under a different name, though I am the "SheaHeyKid" under which this story is registered. 

Reviewer: BaraJam Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2007 03:30 am Title: Chapter 23 - Making Up and Moving On, by Jenna Loves Josh

I think the last three chapters got flipped around maybe??

Author's Response: Sorry, that should be fixed now.

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