10 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2007 06:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Michael and Pam. Wow! Of all the office couples that could happen I never thought of Michael and Pam. I loved the conversation between Jim and Pam. This was really cute and it's going in my favorites!! :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2007 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
I registered with MTT for the express purpose of reviewing this story. It's sweet and sad and downright horrifying, and I love it! I think the emoticon an earlier reviewer was looking for was this: 8O, because I definently have saucer eyes and a gaping mouth myself!
Author's Response:
"Sweet, sad, and downright horrifying."
i think that describes Michael perfectly! I'm glad you liked this. Thanks for the review.
Date: July 11, 2007 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
God, Jim... think. When Pam was about to invite you to her wedding you decided to fly off to Australia. And so you invite Pam to your wedding. Jim, times like this I don't believe you really have that brain of yours that I worship.
Oh, and then it gets mentioned. Why I shouldn't start commenting so early. Or you can read my mind before I think it (or because it is such a common thought... whatever... lets go with the reading mind thing because that is just cool)
Why didn't you Pam? Sooner, rather than Beach Games. Because, it would have made S3 so much more enjoyable.
"Our timing wasn’t right.
Yeah, I guess not.
Do you think things could have worked out if…
I don’t know, Pam. Maybe. Probably. "
Heartbreaking
:O... wow... um, yeah, didn't expect that ending... (actually it is my eyes that are as big as saucers, but I didn't know what keystroke to use to show that)
Author's Response: I knew that ending would freak people out! Hopefully it did so in a good way. Thanks for the detailed review. I really appreciate it.
10 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2007 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this. I actually found it kind of uplifting, since Michael getting out of the car is for me a much happier arc for Pam's future than if Roy had gotten out. I think Pam and Michael have a really interesting dynamic, and I thought their art show moment was the most touching moment of the whole last season. Great story!
8 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2007 05:45 am Title: Chapter 1
The Jim and Pam parts were so heartbreakingly sad.
Date: June 04, 2007 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aagh! Pam and Michael! NO NO NO!!! Sorry that's not a very nice review. I actually really liked this, but the end just made me freak out a little. It's really well written though, and I could see it happening, but I'd cry for Pam for a long, long time if it did.
Date: June 03, 2007 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh dear. The reveal of Pam's fiance pretty much killed off any residual angst/tension/heartwrenching feelings from the rest of the fic. Suppressed guffaw, somewhat painful.
Date: June 03, 2007 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
As hard as I try, I just cannot picture the Pam/Michael pairing. Almost any other pairing I can somehow imagine it, but for some reason these two are just one of those I just can't.... Loved the Jim/Pam parts though. :)
Date: June 03, 2007 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, no! Michael!? How crazy and funny that is.
I like the Jim and Pam conversations you have in italics, but I'm ever so glad it didn't go this way!!
Interesting story!
7 [Report This]Date: June 03, 2007 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved the story, but I was confused at the very end. Michael Scott is Pam's fiance? lol !!