10 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2007 07:51 am Title: Pam
I looooooved this story!
8 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2007 07:41 am Title: Kelly
That totally sounds like something Ryan would say.
Date: June 20, 2007 10:45 pm Title: Pam
Very cute story. Everyone was wonderfully in-character.
8 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2007 08:40 pm Title: Pam
This, of course, was the absolute best one of all! And this line, wow - "Nothing. Just... I love you. Both of you." (I want a Jim Halpert. Don't know what I'll do with Mr. Kaystar, but I'll think of something."
8 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2007 08:33 pm Title: Karen
"After all, if she were carrying his child... well, that would be something she had that Pam didn't." I couldn't help but feel sorry for Karen in this story, but I was sooo glad she was the one who was not pregnant. Whew!
7 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2007 08:20 pm Title: Angela
I can just see and hear Dwight when he says "Excellent". You've done a great job keeping all the voices "real" in this story.
7 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2007 08:16 pm Title: Jan
Too funny that Jan bought her pregnancy tests in bulk on Ebay! And how she wants to have sex at times when Michael just wants to cuddle. Cute role reversal!
Date: June 10, 2007 02:36 pm Title: Pam
Oh, wow. This was great! I loved all of them, but this final chapter was my favorite because it was Jim/Pam, of course, and it incorporated everyone else.
I thought the part in the kitchen where they were all talking about their kids was great. Especially where Ryan said that the baby babbles...Like mother, like daughter, right? lol. I loved it. Great job!
Date: June 08, 2007 12:10 am Title: Pam
Lovely, lovely! I'm so glad I caught up on my reading enough to get back to this one! And of course I'm enjoying the continuing saga!
Playdates with the Schrute twins! Ha!
Date: June 08, 2007 12:06 am Title: Karen
Phew, thank goodness this was the negative one! Poor Karen, though! You made me feel sad for Karen.
Date: June 08, 2007 12:04 am Title: Angela
Wonderful! Plus, if times are hard, don't the Shrutes eat the young? I'm just sayin', it's never to soon to stock the pantry. (Okay, that's disgusting, and I'm only kidding.)
Date: June 08, 2007 12:01 am Title: Jan
Perfect!! I love Jim's "No, but congratulations"! So funny. And Michael's response to the news it just great.
Date: June 07, 2007 11:58 pm Title: Kelly
Priceless. The entire thing. And Ryan's reaction is fantastic.
Date: June 07, 2007 10:19 pm Title: Kelly
The Schrutes must have twins someday. Absolutely must. Fun stuff, well, except for the Karen chapter. But it was all good.
Date: June 07, 2007 09:11 am Title: Karen
This chapter just broke my heart. Her back and forth, the crazy thoughts about just wanting Jim back mixed with her realizations that he might never love her back felt so right and real and hurty.
Date: June 06, 2007 09:46 pm Title: Pam
AW! Again, the coda slayed me. So cute!
Date: June 06, 2007 09:43 pm Title: Angela
Hee! The coda killed me! :D
9 [Report This]Date: June 06, 2007 09:56 am Title: Pam
One word: Adorable!
10 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2007 10:50 pm Title: Pam
Aw! The perfect amount of cute. And yay for Mini-Kelly! Poor Ryan - LOL!
Date: June 05, 2007 10:47 pm Title: Karen
Whoo! I felt bad for Karen, and I didn't want her to have to find out she was pregnant with Jim's baby--and, frankly, it would've been unacceptable for the rest of us, too. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2007 10:44 pm Title: Angela
OMG: seriously? Your talking heads are THE BEST EVER. That is just SO Dwight. And your Angela was dead on, too. Excellent. Just excellent.
10 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2007 10:41 pm Title: Jan
BWAH HA HA HA HA HA! Best Michael talking head EVER. I'm going to marry this chapter.
Date: June 05, 2007 10:38 pm Title: Kelly
Ha! I love the talking head you added at the bottom. Priceless! I can easily picture Ryan's expression on this one. Poor guy. ;)
Date: June 05, 2007 09:09 pm Title: Pam
I've got a big dopey grin on my face now, thanks to you. Loved the story, so glad it was Karen who wasn't pregnant. I mean, I had an actual moment of fear at the thought.
Date: June 05, 2007 08:29 pm Title: Pam
I absolutely love how you had all the "fathers" interacting at the end. That was wonderful to see. And I love that Jim figured out Pam was pregnant before she did. Haha...just wonderful.