1 [Report This]Date: September 23, 2020 11:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay. I have nothing more intelligent to say here than OUCH.
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
so sad! And she did break his heart so often! glad all that's over now:)
Author's Response: Me, too! Thanks for reading!
Date: May 16, 2007 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so bittersweet, it makes my heart hurt. But in a really good way!!!!!!
Author's Response: I swear I wasn't trying to make people hurt, although that seems to be what happened! Thanks for reviewing!
9 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2006 01:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Sigh. This story broke my heart.
Lovely.
Author's Response: Aw! Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2006 11:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful snow tale.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
7 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2006 07:26 am Title: Chapter 1
very sweet! there is something magical about snow...and rain. well the weather in general i guess lol.
Author's Response: Thanks! and I agree about the rain and snow, especially where Jim and Pam are concerned!
Date: August 05, 2006 09:11 am Title: Chapter 1
I just realized that reading this story sparked an Office related dream I had last night. And my first - so congrats to you. Anyway - In my dream I basically told Roy that the ring he bought Pam was pathetic. LOL!
But back to your story. I loved it. You write them so well, so sweetly and oh so sad. :( But the Mrs. B fic more than made up for it so I forgive you. Excellent job. :)
Author's Response:
Wow! I'm honored. :)
Sorry to make you sad, but I'm glad you liked it!
8 [Report This]Date: August 05, 2006 08:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Great fic, sad ending. "Nothing she does with Jim is ever innocent." - very true...
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! Glad you liked it.
10 [Report This]Date: August 05, 2006 12:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved all of your new stories! But the last line of this one killed me. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks! Not trying to kill you, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
She lowers her eyes to her hand as Jim gently passes his thumb over her ring finger, just once, before dropping her hand.
I'm not sure why, but that's such a perfect image of Jim and Pam... lovely.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks!
Date: August 04, 2006 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nothing she does with Jim is ever innocent.
Jim watches her go, sparing him one sidelong glance before lowering her eyes to the ground, slipping her arm through Roy's, and walking away from him.
He wonders if she'll ever stop breaking his heart.
chilling. the part about jim slipping the ring on pams finger was particularly effective.
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
She better stop breaking his heart. This was fantastic.
Author's Response: I know! She sucks. Thanks for the review. :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
This killed me...you wrote their situation so well--playful and fun on the outside, and just aching on the inside.
Author's Response: Thanks! That's really how I see it, especially for Jim.
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved, loved, loved this. So sad, but still wonderful.
Author's Response: Thanks!
8 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ack. Pain. But also SweetHotSnow awesomeness. I had shivers when he whispered in her ear at the beginning. You write nice prose :)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! :) You make me grin.
9 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
I can totally, totally see this as an episode. Fun, silly, flirtatious, and then *BAM* heartbreaking. You're wrecking me, today!
Author's Response: Thanks! I don't want to wreck you, but it's still nice to know I can. :)
Date: August 04, 2006 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is just painfully lovely. Sad Jim breaks my heart!
Author's Response: I know! He breaks my heart, too. Is it weird I get so much pleasure from writing it? Thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story. I especially loved this line - "He wonders if she'll ever stop breaking his heart." Just beautifully sad.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing.