5 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2008 11:29 am Title: She's Expunge-Worthy
So, SO awesome. I love you and your stories!
Date: July 07, 2007 04:35 pm Title: She's Expunge-Worthy
Very, very cute story. All of the objects were SO Karen, and I loved how they stuck out like sore thumbs in Jim's life. I could totally see a couple of these episodes happening on the show. Well done!
Date: June 10, 2007 02:56 pm Title: She's Expunge-Worthy
Awww...this was sweet. I don't think it was anti-Karen at all...just typical "get rid of traces of former girlfriend". Very cute.
Date: June 07, 2007 08:09 pm Title: She's Expunge-Worthy
Haha, these little acts of vindictiveness are fun and don't hurt anyone... hey, whatever it takes for them to move on happily together with no baggage! This was cute.
9 [Report This]Date: June 06, 2007 09:28 pm Title: She's Expunge-Worthy
Very funny stuff here. Definitely fits with Pam's new S3 attitude.
Date: June 06, 2007 07:00 pm Title: She's Expunge-Worthy
First of all: LOVE for the chapter title. Hee!
Second, the Costco-sized box of condoms is so fabulous I can't properly express it in words.
And finally, I love Pam being just a tish bitchy over the Karen erasure. Go FNB, go!
Author's Response: that actually took some extensive research ;) haha
8 [Report This]Date: June 06, 2007 02:27 pm Title: She's Expunge-Worthy
I absolutely loved Pam's way of getting rid of the heart next to Karen's name in Jim's phone. Very creative story - and very funny! I think these were a natural reaction for a person in a new relationship to not want reminders of the old relationship surrounding them.
PS I added a disclaimer as per the MTT guidelines.
Author's Response:
oh thank you! I totally forgot to do that, I posted this in a rush last night at around 2am because I couldn't let it linger a second longer without driving me insane.
sorry about that!
Date: June 06, 2007 11:02 am Title: She's Expunge-Worthy
This was well written and entertaining, but It felt to me too much like Pam (and Jim too for that matter) was bullying someone who wasnt there to defend herself. If Karen was so worthless to Jim in retrospect, then he's a jerk for keeping her around. Im pretty sure that wasnt what you were going for but its how it got me. Although the story didnt hit me right, I like your writing and dont mean to sound critical.
Author's Response:
don't worry about it. This wasn't written for Karen fans. Because I am the ultimate jammer and if I had it my way Karen would have drown in Lake Scranton...but thats just me :)
thanks for reading and reviewing anyway!
Date: June 06, 2007 09:44 am Title: She's Expunge-Worthy
Awesome! I loved how they got any lingering reminders of Karen out of the way one by one...very smart and very well written
9 [Report This]Date: June 06, 2007 09:33 am Title: She's Expunge-Worthy
Wonderful! **adding to favorites immediately**
And, Jim's last line...PERFECTION!!
Author's Response:
I'm really glad you said that, because I went though like 7 ending lines and I was afraid I made the wrong choice. :)
Date: June 06, 2007 09:19 am Title: She's Expunge-Worthy
Love it! How sweet, them quietly removing the traces of Karen without bitterness or anger, just...matter-of-factly moving on.
Date: June 06, 2007 08:20 am Title: She's Expunge-Worthy
Yay! I like all your changes! What a great idea to put in Sasha, and Jim coaxing Pam like a 5-year-old is cute.
This was such a great idea, and it really came out well! Redact that woman! Out, I say!
Date: June 06, 2007 07:55 am Title: She's Expunge-Worthy
Niiiiice! I especially loved her deleting Karen from his phone. Even though it's a little harsh. Not sure how I'd react to that if I were Jim. But still, yay for Karen being gone!!! :D
Author's Response:
of course he would say "thank you Pam! that crazy whore is the last thing on my mind and I shall never call her again!! muah hah hah!!"
I guess you gotta be harsh when you're in a situation like Pam, I mean would you want the chance of Karen stealing Jim away again? hehe
Thanks so much for the review! :)
Date: June 06, 2007 06:05 am Title: She's Expunge-Worthy
First of all, I'd drive over fifty miles for a box of 108 condoms. But I also drove seventy some miles for a cheesesteak sub once, and I'm kind of crazy.
But, I love the fact that you made what could have been a sensitive topic, where Pam could have come off petty and mean, and you made them both sweet and understanding of each other. Have you thought about a sequel where Jim has to redact Roy, not necessarily his things because its already been a while, but some of Pam's more automatic, engrained habits after her last, long relationship with Roy?
Anyway, awesome job. I really, really liked this.
Author's Response:
I think it would definately be a worthwhile drive...hehe
i'm glad you enjoyed it! thanks for the review
Date: June 06, 2007 05:08 am Title: She's Expunge-Worthy
In III, I love that first line. - is that supposed to be there? Cause I am a wee bit confused!
But besides that line, yeah, it totally made me laugh. All of it. Giggling like crazy.
And yes, they just need to get rid of Karen... like she never existed.
Author's Response:
thank you so much for pointing that out!! that was a leftover from my beta that i missed. all taken care of!
and i'm glad I could induce some giggling! :)