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Reviewer: officefreak Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2007 07:40 pm Title: The Fire

ACK! Get me all worked up and then leave me hanging? I guess a loooong hot shower with a detachable showerhead will have to do until the next chapter. heehee

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27, 2007 11:31 am Title: The Fire

Aww, they even text cute!

Reviewer: malcolm lake Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26, 2007 09:11 pm Title: The Fire

Very nice touch with the text message.  Although you know Kelly would try to look over Pam's shoulder.  Thanks for writing another installment

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26, 2007 06:18 pm Title: The Fire

lol, I loved Kev's last line! The whole chapter was great though. I can't wait for Halloween!

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26, 2007 05:53 pm Title: Sexual Harassment

I hate that winky.  I usually respond with the dancing pig.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 26, 2007 01:22 pm Title: The Fire

ha - this is a nice sweet AU season 2 so far.  Looking forward to more, definitely!!

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2007 03:12 pm Title: Office Olympics

Excited clap! That was really cute. I love the gold medal left on his disk for him. I'm really enjoying this story and the different direction of what might have been. Great job.

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2007 01:22 pm Title: Office Olympics

Yay for kissing! And yay for a second gold medal! And yay for you for writing another chapter!!! ;)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2007 03:58 pm Title: Office Olympics

Oooh!  Gold medal for kiss-ing!  (That's my way of putting it so you know I'm saying it like a 10-year-old.  I'm so mature.)

This is very nice.  I love their THs at the beginning, their attempts to figure out what's going on, Roy's roses (yikes!) and the subtle Angela-threat, and of course, the kiss-ing

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2007 01:57 pm Title: Office Olympics

Wow -- that definitely deserves a gold medal, er, yogurt lid!  The talking heads sound just like them.  Painfully like them.

Reviewer: Donnelly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2007 01:51 pm Title: Office Olympics

awwwwwwwwwwww

Reviewer: malcolm lake Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2007 01:47 pm Title: Office Olympics

I like that Jim and Pam are now together.  Of course, that gives them options other than teambuilding for the next episode (the fire).  There has to be a place where they can find a minute or two to themselves.

Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2007 12:41 pm Title: Sexual Harassment

Still really fun! Keep it up!

Reviewer: Donnelly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2007 01:13 pm Title: Sexual Harassment

awsome! update soon.

Author's Response: I'm working on it,! Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 07:41 pm Title: Sexual Harassment

Wow. Pam moved out. Pam's mom told Roy to hit the bricks. And Pam asked Jim out.  I love this story!

Author's Response: Yep, it was a busy Chapter 2. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 07:34 pm Title: The Dundies

Yay for another wonderful S2 based story - I just love where this one is going already!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: tessa mae Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 11:05 am Title: Sexual Harassment

I am in love with this! The characters are spot-on, not to mention the prank idea of making Dwight think that Todd Packer is Voldemort made me choke on my Diet Coke. Keep up the fantastic work and I can't wait for Office Olympics!

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! I hope to keep it up!

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 08:07 am Title: Sexual Harassment

Woo-Hoo!!!!!!!! I'm so excited that she asked him out! Yes! Anyway, this was great. I really loved Pam's mom being so cool, and the argument with Roy at the beginning. Nicely done!


Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 07:18 am Title: Sexual Harassment

Who has two thumbs and is really enjoying this story?  This girl.

My one teeny quibble is that when Jim notices she's no longer engaged, his mental fist pump (great image, BTW) would not be for making her laugh, it would be for SHE'S NOT ENGAGED!  SHE'S NOT ENGAGED!  Wouldn't it?

I love Jim drifting off when he sees the "no engagement ring" finger.

I love Pam's "thumbs" comment and Jim deciding Pam had the most awesome mom ever.

I'm so excited that this will follow the episodes.  Whoohoo! 



Author's Response:

Well, he tried valiantly to hide his excitement in finding that out, so he saved the fist pump for cheering her up. Maybe a bit too idealistic?  Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 06:35 am Title: Sexual Harassment

Who has two thumbs and loves this story? ME! Are you going to do the entirety of season 2? Because that would be really, really okay with me.



Author's Response: Yep, I'm gonna go through all of season 2, and then probably start a new story (Third Drink) that continues into season 3.

Reviewer: malcolm lake Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 03:40 am Title: Sexual Harassment

Very Cool.  I like how you're setting things up and it fits with the characters.  Really hope you continue the story

Author's Response: I'll definitely continue. This one doesn't end until the series ends. Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: BaraJam Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 02:27 am Title: Sexual Harassment

yeah! i heart how you had pam's mom react to this. I always had a problem with how nice Mrs. Beesley treated Roy...i mean he drug his feet for 3 yrs. update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! I always felt that she realized he was being fake, but was being respectful to her daughter.

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2007 10:13 am Title: The Dundies

This is really fun! I love S2, and I'm really excited for more!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 08:14 pm Title: The Dundies

Hurray for Pam figuring it out when she should have!  (Or, at least, earlier than she did.)

Nice job, and I sure love the last line! 



Author's Response: The last line was the first thing I wrote for the story. It was fun to work up to that point. Thanks for your comment!

Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 07:11 pm Title: The Dundies

um, awesome. You have me completely hooked. I'm right back in my season two mindset, and I'm loving it. I'm always a little hesitant to get to into AU fics, but I can tell this one is going to be very good [/jim]

Author's Response: Wow, I sure hope I can live up to it. Working on the next chapter now. Thanks for the comment!

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