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Reviewer: buymeacoke Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2007 12:45 am Title: Chapter 1

i love this! its great how in one chapter you capture all different aspects of their relationship. what funny, sexy, and adorable little oneshot.

Reviewer: Rowena666 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

"She screams his name when she comes.  After the third night he stays over, her neighbors introduce themselves by saying “You must be Jim.” "

Hehe! That is the funniest thing I've read in a long time. Excellent little fic, overall.

Reviewer: banana slings Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2007 02:37 am Title: Chapter 1

Reading this + listening to yaz ("only you") = tears of joy!! I'm a dork, & slightly tipsy but I still know good fic when I see it! Fantastic.

Reviewer: invis Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 13, 2007 12:48 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, giant sigh of happiness!!!  I absolutely love the "They are loud" section.  Hee!  And yay for them!  (Not so "yay" for their neighbors, but whaddaya gonna do?)

Excellent, excellent fic.  If this fic pulled out a ring on the beach, I would totally marry it. 

Reviewer: brillig Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2007 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh this was lovely and real and funny and lovely.

 Beautifully written!

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2007 08:11 am Title: Chapter 1

This is so sweet and funny. i love "They are loud." i can SO see that happening! also, the matching outfits for the "Professional Kissing Partners" is a wonderfully hilarious addition!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2007 06:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Lovely, especially t he neighbors. ;)

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2007 05:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Now I'm all smiley!  Very great.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2007 01:42 am Title: Chapter 1

This is a lovely multifaced story.  It was so funny ("You must be Jim."  Hee.) and sexy and sweet.   Love it.

Reviewer: collardgreens Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

hahaha the "They are loud" made me laugh out loud. tehee. Hi jim hi pam. ahh funny. 

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

So cute! I especially love the "they are loud" paragraph. Hee!

Reviewer: Stilla Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yay!!!!

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh this is so perfect. I just love the idea of them not being able to keep their hands off of one another. Exactly what I'd love to see happen (in my dreams, I know) Glad we're on the same page though, even if the show won't be!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

This fic is totally adorkable.  Yeah, go ahead you two, try to take it slow...ha.  Love the neighbors calling them by name...whoopsy!  And then he proposes on the beach, awwwww.  Thanks for the loverly fluff.

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Haha...love the part about Jim's and Pam's neighbors.  That's awesome.  Overall...very cute.  Simple but beautiful.  And loved the proposal...always a nice touch. =)

Reviewer: bealsa Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I loved it. All of it. Especially the bit about their neighbors. Heh.

Reviewer: Ellelque Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was short, sweet and steamy!  I like.  I can picture it.  The best part is the neighbor angle.  Such a LOL item.  I bet Jim never knew Pam was a screamer.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Can I just say how awesome it was to have them talking about when they grow up. Because, its like, I am in college, and I was talking with my neighbors, and I was like, "Yeah, i wanna do this when i grow up." and I felt stupid because its like, I am grown up... but, yeah, not really. So, I like that they still do it also.

HAHA - funniest line ever: After the third night he stays over, her neighbors introduce themselves by saying “You must be Jim.”

So this was sweet funny and happy and just great. :)

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm sitting here with this enormous, ridiculous grin on my face -- this is just pitch perfect: sweet, sexy, realistic...them.  Love it.  (And incidentally, it's nice to see a fic wherein they take it slow; I think they'd be inclined to do just that, at least for as long as they could manage it, heh....)

Terrific job, bitterpill!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is perfect, and I love it.   I laughed at "You must be Jim"; that section was my favorite.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

I absolutely LOVED this!!!  Loved loved loved it. And I love you for writing it. Right into my favorites - after I read it again.

Reviewer: bufffy6 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is perfection! Made me smile =) Thanks for writing

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

“You must be Jim.”  Hee!  That. is. awesome.

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really nice. Well written and just really sweet. Like us all, I've been reading a lot of 'happy Jim and Pam' fic and this stands apart from the pack.

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

This just made me ridiculously happy. Hot and sweet and funny and wonderfully simple and just everything it should be. Especially liked the kissing section. So romantic and so perfectly in character. Loved it.

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