1 [Report This]Date: September 23, 2020 10:08 am Title: Chapter 1
The ending of this is amazing.
10 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2008 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
I didn't expect that ending at all! Cute story.
Date: January 14, 2007 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes! Love the supply closet! This is great!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
Date: October 17, 2006 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Show, don't tell. First rule of storytelling. What you have here is a description of a story, not a story. But it's a start.
Good luck!
Author's Response: Thanks. That's always been a problem of mine.
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2006 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very cute and I love the end.
Author's Response: Thanks!
8 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2006 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just love happy endings! Locking herself in the supply closet with Jim seems exactly like the type of thing Pam would do.
Author's Response:
You know, I wish she would lock herself in there with him! And that we get to see it...
Thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2006 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love it!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!
9 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2006 10:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2006 07:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Yea for Pam finding such a hot way to break the ice! Very nice, I loved the ending.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I'm such a fan of Jam and supply closets. I wish they had one in the office for real. Think of the possibilities!
10 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2006 06:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay for devious Pam. And YAY for supply closets. They're totally hot. :)
Author's Response: I agree! Thanks for the review!
8 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2006 05:38 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad the muse struck like that! That was lovely. I kind of wished you made it even longer, and expanded the dialogue because I didn't quite want the moment between them to end! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! You know, I love my muse, I really do. But if it doesn't let me get some sleep, I'm gonna kick it to the curb!
I would have liked to have done some more dialoge and stuff, but I just am not very good at writing it. So I try to stay away a bit.
9 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2006 05:31 am Title: Chapter 1
He looks down at her and she looks up at him, their eyes meeting for the first time in over half a year, everything else slipping away as they return home.
Beautiful. This moment feels entirely real.
Author's Response: Aw! Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2006 05:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Damn, I love you. This is just too perfect.
Author's Response: Haha! Thanks. That's the kind of reaction I love!
Author's Response: Haha! Thanks. That's the kind of reaction I love!