Date: July 06, 2007 02:14 pm Title: Revelations
Oh, man. Pam's got some 'splainin to do - I'm not normally very sympathetic with women who keep children secret from the fathers. I know Jim was the one in the wrong at first, but in my eyes this definitely trumps his mistake as far as bad deeds! Very cool surprise, though, and I look forward to seeing how it's resolved.
Date: July 03, 2007 09:43 am Title: Revelations
oh no! Please update soon, the suspense is killing me. I love your writing. I got through these 4 chapters so fast and I can't wait to find out what happens next...hope there's a happy ending for Jim in all this.
Date: July 02, 2007 05:59 am Title: Revelations
oh, so sad -- Jim!!!
This part must be missing a word or something:
The photograph he and Pam that Jim was still holding slipped through his fingers and fell to the ground.
I gather it's a critical detail, no?
8 [Report This]Date: July 02, 2007 05:56 am Title: Revelations
Wow, this is not what I expected. I'm not sure what I expected, but not this. Can't wait to see where this is going.
10 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2007 08:44 pm Title: Before The Fall
I love that you had Pam engaged to someone else! I love Jim and Pam together, but I've read some fics where they have a falling out and don't see each other for years and Pam is always still single in the ones I've read. This is FNB!!! She would absolutely move on to a new guy if she decided to move away to move on, so I love that you portrayed that!
Crossing my fingers that Jim and Pam meet face to face to talk it out.
8 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2007 08:40 pm Title: Revelations
OMG!!!! Seems there's some things that Kelly doesn't know! This is getting really good. Please update soon - gah!!!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2007 08:38 pm Title: Revelations
Long lost child moments like that always get me...
This is so addictive.
Date: July 01, 2007 08:23 pm Title: Before The Fall
Wow...if the 6 years twist wasnt a huge one, this DEFINITELY is!!
Date: July 01, 2007 07:40 pm Title: Revelations
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
9 [Report This]Date: June 17, 2007 06:26 pm Title: Click
2 years! WTF Jim! Seriously. If this really happens, I'm gonna implode on myself like a dying star. Loving this story!
Author's Response: It's actually been about six years. And since this is fanfiction, I can write it however, but if this ever happened and Jim and Pam didn't see each other for six years, I'd be a very unhappy viewer! haha But I'm glad you're enjoying it, thanks for the review!
Date: June 17, 2007 11:05 am Title: Click
i didnt see that comming. update soon!
Date: June 17, 2007 12:18 am Title: Click
Awww, she left without saying goodbye. GO find her Jim!. I'm really enjoying this story. All the chapters seem to end in cliffhangers. Great job.
Author's Response:
I know, I try to end with a cliffhanger to keep things interesting haha, thanks for reviewing! :)
Date: June 17, 2007 12:18 am Title: Click
Awww, she left without saying goodbye. GO find her Jim!. I'm really enjoying this story. All the chapters seem to end in cliffhangers. Great job.
Date: June 16, 2007 09:08 pm Title: Click
You are breaking my heart. Good for Pam though. I hope she's been working on her art!
Author's Response: I apologize for breaking your heart... hopefully it will mend soon. Thanks so much for the review.
Date: June 16, 2007 09:01 pm Title: Upside Down
This was good. I'm glad Pam wasn't like, "oh, it's okay Jim. I love you." I feel like the old Pam would have done that. So, angst galore, but I'm looking forward to finding out how Jim fixes this!
Date: June 16, 2007 08:25 pm Title: Before The Fall
Wow. 6 years. I think that was a little bit of a drastic move on Pam's part, but hey I'm curious to see what happens next! Update soon please :)
Author's Response: The writers were giving us Bold!Pam towards the end of season 3... so, I continued with the bold Pam who makes very brash decisions, for the sake of the plot. hehe :) Thanks for the review!
7 [Report This]Date: June 16, 2007 08:10 pm Title: Click
So I went out with Pam while I was still with Karen, she’s gone now!
Jim, you didn't just go out with Pam while you were with Karen, you slept with her!
Six years without trying to connect with each other? Wow.
Author's Response: Technically, its six years without Pam contacting Jim. He doesn't really know where she is... except for her city...
Date: June 15, 2007 09:52 am Title: Upside Down
awwww sad. update soon.
Date: June 15, 2007 07:35 am Title: Upside Down
That sucks. Not the story, the story's good, just the situation that Jim got himself into. So next chapter are we jumping back to the present? I want to see them get back together!
8 [Report This]Date: June 15, 2007 07:02 am Title: Upside Down
This is most definately not rosy. She's got to talk to him eventually, right? Karen's disappearance was a little too 'poof' and in that way a little too clean and easy. I'm interested to see how long Pam's shun holds out. Did she take lessons from Dwight?
Author's Response: I know Karen's departure was a little too clean and easy... but when I really think about it, it seems that she's only in Scranton for Jim, she doesn't really love the work or the people. When season 4 starts up next season, I'd be really surprised to see her stay being single and seemingly friendless in a town she doesn't seem to like very much. But that's why I'm not a writer. haha, but I appreciate the review!
Date: June 14, 2007 10:19 pm Title: Before The Fall
Great start. This story really has me hooked. And I love the little cliffhanger ending. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: June 14, 2007 09:28 pm Title: Upside Down
oh my goodness, please let this have a happy ending!!! but i love your writing, its really realistic!
7 [Report This]Date: June 14, 2007 08:33 pm Title: Upside Down
Oh man, I was afraid of that.
I know you said it was un-betaed and unproofed, may I point out a few things you might want to correct?
“I’ve never been so humiliating in my entire life, Jim - think you meant humilated.
You took me out, you slept with me, all while you had a girlfriend that thought you too were still together - two
He looked out the window and watched her get into a cap - cab
Author's Response:
Thanks for pointing those out to me. I have fixed the ones you pointed out, I'm sorry about that... but I did warn you ;)
9 [Report This]Date: June 14, 2007 08:01 pm Title: Upside Down
This might be 1/2 realistic to season 4 after all do all the Jam fans out there think things will go smoothly for our two heros?
9 [Report This]Date: June 14, 2007 08:01 pm Title: Upside Down
This might be 1/2 realistic to season 4 after all do all the Jam fans out there think things will go smoothly for our two heros?