Date: July 13, 2007 11:15 pm Title: Frat boys, threesomes, and oversized sweatshirts
Buckle up? Like for a bumpy ride? I am excited for this ride, but a tad scared too... and am looking forward to see what you have in store.
That was such a fun and happy chapter. I loved all their interactions in the middle of the crowd. And I love your Mark. Nice work!
Author's Response: a little bumpy, yeah. But don't worry cause it'll be ok lol. Glad you're enjoying it!
10 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2007 10:40 pm Title: Frat boys, threesomes, and oversized sweatshirts
whew. I am SO happy I checked here one more time before heading to bed!! I actually clapped when I saw you posted! YAY!
I love this - your imagery is just perfect - I get butterflies! And I honestly really like the poetry at the beginning and end. This is made of awesome! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: thank you!!! I'm glad you checked too, and I'm glad you liked the poetry. Thanks so much for the review.
Date: July 12, 2007 04:42 pm Title: Diners and Dreams
i am so in love with this story
Author's Response: thank you
Date: July 10, 2007 01:30 pm Title: Diners and Dreams
This is awesome! I absolutely adore the Mark/Mindy dynamic in this chapter - hysterical yet totally realistic/natural. I bet she's hot for him deep down ;)
And the Pam/Jim is getting *very* intense - not much to say on it, because I am stunned - just looking forward to seeing where you take it next!
Author's Response:
HAHA! She so is!
Thanks for reading/reviewing! Keep me posted.
10 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2007 12:03 am Title: Diners and Dreams
Whoa. Jim, way to leave the girl hot and bothered. That was just...harsh. And so freakin' hot.
Author's Response:
haha! harsh and hot. agreed.
Date: July 09, 2007 11:53 pm Title: Red light, Green light
Damn you, Mark! Damn you to hell!
Oops. Sorry about the outburst. I love you, Mark. I'm not mad at you, just at the situation. It's not your fault. Just NEVER WALK IN ON JIM AND PAM AGAIN! And, ya know, we'll be fine.
Author's Response:
lol agreed... got that, Mark?
Ok he says he won't do it again.
Date: July 09, 2007 10:07 pm Title: Diners and Dreams
SOOOOO GOOOD! You can't stop there....please continue soon!! :)
Author's Response: wouldn't dare to stop there ;-) Keep me posted with how it sits with you!
Date: July 09, 2007 08:19 pm Title: Diners and Dreams
YYYAAAAAAAAAAAYAYAYAYA MARK! I love the way you write mark. he's so carelessly indifferent but without being a jerk. and you can tell he really cares about jim. his interaction with mindy was pricless--great backstory! i'm sorry i don't have anything constructive to say, but i really can't find much fault with this story. i really dislike most AU, but this beautiful story completly has me sold; i love it love it love it!!!!
Author's Response: lol!!! Thank you! I know I love Mark too...he keeps sneaking into every chapter even when I don't mean for him to. I'm trying to make it AU in a way that you forget that it's like a mid-season veer off track. I hope it's working. Thanks for the review, please keep reading and letting me know what you think!
Date: July 09, 2007 07:37 pm Title: Diners and Dreams
Um, HOLY CRAP! That was fabulous; I mean really - I wish I could write "the kissin'" that well.
Author's Response: lol yes! Sooooo happy you liked the kiss. You're writing is great, so I totally appreciate the compliment. Keep reading and letting me know how it goes.
Date: July 09, 2007 07:07 pm Title: Diners and Dreams
Wow. That was really great. I loved Pam's scenes with Mark, that was really well written and made so much sense. I could really see where all that awkwardness would come from. I love how honest Jim and Pam are trying to be with each other. And that ending was just, really, really great. Man, Jim is a total superhero for being able to pull away from that. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: ;-) Jim IS a superhero. thanks for the review!
Date: July 09, 2007 05:53 pm Title: Diners and Dreams
wow. so i've read a LOT of first kisses b/w Jim and Pam in fanfiction, but this quite possibly my favorite. it's described so perfectly, and it's so innocent, but so HOT all at the same time. wow. just... wow. that was amazing. it's also just a lovely continuation of a wonderful fic anyway :) i really like the scene with Pam and Mark here. it's so sweet how he cares about Jim.
Author's Response: I always think the slower the kiss the hotter it is...although there IS something to be said for a "grab and devour" moment. Anyway, thanks for the review! I'm glad you're reading and liking it.
Date: July 09, 2007 04:28 pm Title: Burn and beat
I ADORE you. This is amazing. Point Blank.
Author's Response: Thank you. Point blank.
Date: July 09, 2007 04:24 pm Title: Diners and Dreams
agh! I can't wait to read the next one!!!
Author's Response: ...me neither... sorry to all that this is so slow in the making. I'm getting there with the next chapter.
Date: July 09, 2007 02:50 pm Title: Diners and Dreams
I love so many things about you right now. This story makes me feel so happy. I kind of want to live it. Well I guess that's not gonna happen is it. I quite literally may not be able to wait much longer for more.
Author's Response: hopefully more by tomorrow, if I continue at this rate. Glad I could make you happy and give you an imaginary life to live ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: July 09, 2007 02:03 pm Title: Diners and Dreams
Green light for more! Green light for more!
Author's Response: haha!!! You got it
Date: July 09, 2007 01:10 pm Title: Diners and Dreams
ahhhhhhhhhh. oh be still my heart. I love this to pieces. Pieces so small they are like confetti in my brain. You are awesomeness!!!
Author's Response: lol your review is awesomeness. thanks ;-)
Date: July 09, 2007 12:47 pm Title: Diners and Dreams
Love it. update soon!
Author's Response: by the weekend I hope
Date: July 09, 2007 09:53 am Title: Diners and Dreams
Wow. I found myself holding my breath through the end there. Just wow. Intense. And awesome. Loved Mindy. And Mark's read of Pam and Pam's read of Mark. Good stuff.
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: July 09, 2007 09:48 am Title: Diners and Dreams
Great intensity, tension and flow. Keep going!
Author's Response: will do!
10 [Report This]Date: July 09, 2007 09:26 am Title: Diners and Dreams
Lay it on you? I'm too busy having naughty "laying" thoughts to form a coherent review....so, my apologies.
Author's Response:
no apologies necessary, lay it on me was with a little bit of a TWSS twinkle in my eye ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: July 09, 2007 08:55 am Title: Diners and Dreams
Oooohhhh, the last part- oh, the delicious tension! With his hand on her collarbone, and the soft kisses and the whisper in her ear, and the giving her a second because she REALLY needed it. *swoon*
MORE!
Author's Response:
haha! swoon...I love it. More soon!
10 [Report This]Date: July 09, 2007 08:55 am Title: Diners and Dreams
Oooh, I love good Jim/Pam tension. And that was GOOD. :-)
More, please.
Author's Response: ;-) thanks
Date: July 09, 2007 08:37 am Title: Diners and Dreams
Oh goodness! Pam needs to stop thinking so much :-)
Honestly, this is so great. You have me completely hooked and I can't wait to see what you have coming next!
Author's Response: lol she's such a girl ;-) Thanks for being hooked, I'll try to keep it going.
Date: July 09, 2007 06:20 am Title: Diners and Dreams
Wow Stablegirl. This is a great read and that last part was hot in the most awesome way. Keep it up.
Author's Response: I'll try!
Date: July 09, 2007 06:04 am Title: Diners and Dreams
whew! I need a second, too!
Nice characterization of Mark here. I don't think I've seen that before. "He did NOT get this Pam person… basically she lived inside her own head or something and he just didn’t get it." Well, actually that's a description of Pam, but it's Mark's observation, so I guess that's what I mean.
Author's Response:
I think we all need a second, haha.
Yeah sometimes I think other people might think that of Pam, so thought I'd throw it in there. Thanks for reviewing!