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Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2007 06:03 pm Title: What Might Have Happened

One paragraph in, and I can already tell I am going to love it. Because, it breaks me heart. Does that make sense? Probably not, but it is true. So, the basic idea is that the writing is already enough to bring me back to the pain of that night and make me sad. So, yeah.

I have had that physically sick because so emotionally sick feeling. I think we all have. But yep, I think that is the worst type of sick, becuase there is nothing you can do, and it just gets worse and worse.

Not even through except needed to tell you how realistic and possible this is, and it is totally sad and really really good.

this was wonderfully good. So realistic, and so sad, and I love how she comes to the realization.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It makes perfect sense to me. I love stories that are realistic, even if they are realisticly painful, so I'm really happy I was able to pull that off in my story!

Author's Response: P.S. This is probably my favorite review ever so extra thank you!

Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2007 09:36 am Title: What Might Have Happened

I think just justice has been served. Nice job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2007 08:42 am Title: What Might Have Happened

Very well done...when I think about these two I wonder which would be worse, Jim's pain as he drove to Stamford or Pam's hollow emptiness when she realized he was gone.  I think your take on how the day would have gone for Pam is spot on, though I'm not sure how the last thought that you show her having here fits with her not calling the wedding off until three days before it was scheduled. 

Author's Response: Thanks! I know exactly what you mean, I think it's impossible to tell who was in more pain after that night. And for the last thought, I always imagined her knowing immediately that she loved Jim too much and couldn't marry Roy, and her struggle in the weeks afterwards was how she would end the relationship she's been in half her life. I guess I could have explained that more. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2007 08:14 am Title: What Might Have Happened

WOW!  I love your interpretation as to what might have happened.  I definitely look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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