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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2020 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Disturbingly plausible because this is very much aligned with their canonical character flaws. Well done.

Reviewer: sinkchick81 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2008 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

omg so good! i am a sucker for an unhappy ending and you did a marvelously good one. great job!

Reviewer: Emilys List Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 23, 2007 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

oh dear god! the ANGST! this was amazing and hotness and fab. i love this. thank you!

Reviewer: Jim Anonymous 9 [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2006 10:15 am Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic.  This is what a network TV show would never have the cojones to do (although if one ever would, The Office would be it).  But it's realistic - happy endings are fantasies, the nice guy finishes last, the hero loses, girl plays both sides against the middle and marries the loser.

Now, that said, I wouldn't mind an extra chapter where Pam does find him....but it's certainly not necessary. 

Reviewer: Crystal Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2006 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow. That was really well written and I agree that it is sad, but true - I can see it happening! Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: yippee Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2006 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow this hurt. Poor Jim. Silly Pam.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2006 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story - can't wait to read more. Poor Jim.

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2006 05:03 am Title: Chapter 1

Well done - especially the dialogue. J&P's voices really come through. The scene where they're...against the door....was also extremely potent, no pun intended (well maybe a little bit.)

Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2006 12:28 am Title: Chapter 1

This is fantastic. This isn't a one-shot, is it? Please say no. I want her to come to her damned senses!

Reviewer: livia_daemon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2006 12:08 am Title: Chapter 1

This is so Pam.  I can see her try to not hurt Roy's feelings, yet want to be with Jim.  Great story!

Reviewer: hireath Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2006 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow.  What a hearbreaking story.  The sex was quite good though!  Up against the door?  Fully clothed?  Yummy. 

As for Jim leaving, part of me thinks 'good for him'.  The other part wants those two crazy kids to just get it right together.  Argh!  Great story.

 

Reviewer: samsmom Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2006 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

So sad, but I can see it happening.

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