Date: July 02, 2007 08:40 am Title: Chapter 1
That was a really lovely first fic! Congratulations. I like the structure you choose for it, with the repetitions. It's almost more of a poem than a story. I hope you continue to post stories.
By the way, I added the challenge tag to it so people can find it when searching for the challenge. :)
Date: June 30, 2007 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well if this is any indication of what you're future fics will be like, then I'm excited to read more from you! I could totally see them talking the entire date and barely touching their food because they have so much to catch up on, and it comes so easily to them! Great job!