Date: July 08, 2007 10:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Smokin' hot. Nice job, EH! :-)
Author's Response: Hi dear, sorry I took so long getting back to you. I didn't realize you had reviewed my little story. Thanks so much. Always nice to get kudos from a fellow hussy!
Date: July 03, 2007 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ummm.... Wow! Had no idea you could put that much hottness into such a short fic. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the kind words Jam01. I'm glad you liked my little story. If you found it hot, then I guess I accomplished my goal of creating a mood in only 55 words. Thanks again.
10 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2007 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
I never realized that 55 (well, 51 according to the MTT counters) words could be that sensual and evoke as much sensual emotion that it did (for me)! Awesome job! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. You guys are all such an inspiration. I figured I'd jump in with something short and concise to start. I'm glad I was able to convey the emotions between them as well as the "heat", since that's what makes a good Jim/Pam story. Thanks again!
Date: July 01, 2007 11:11 am Title: Chapter 1
wow, short, but very descriptive.
Author's Response:
Hi Emily, Thanks for reading and reviewing my little drabble! It was tough trying to convey a mood in only 55 words, but hopefully I succeeded somewhat. Your review is appreciated by this newbie writer, thanks!
Date: July 01, 2007 06:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Just....wow. (/jim)
That packed a powerful little punch, now didn't it? Be prepared...we're going to expect more out of you now.
Author's Response: Jillyree, thank you so much for reading my story and reccing it on TWoP. What a compliment! I saw it this morning at work, but I was so busy I couldn't get online until now! So, gold medal to you, girlfriend, and thanks again!
10 [Report This]Date: June 30, 2007 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well now, missy. I've gotten a bazillion reviews from you (you rock for that, BTW), and then here you go -- take a challenge and freaking blow it out of the WATER. It's hard to write the sexy stuff believably and/or not gratuitously -- you've totally nailed it here (ur, no pun intended).
Seriously - this is so succinct, articulate, and absolutely channels Jim and Pam. Way to go! (You realize, though, that you've slipped into the dark side - so we'll all be hounding you for more stuff....)
Author's Response: Seriously, how can I help but gush over everything you write? Thanks for the feedback; I'm glad it sounded realistic. I was a little nervous posting an "M" fic, and I tried to keep the phrasing "tight" to avoid rambling cliches, which are easy to write, especially with a limited word count. I'd love to write more fic someday, but honestly, I'm lucky I find time to read and review! Thanks again.
9 [Report This]Date: June 30, 2007 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
You're good at this! And, for something so short, it's actually pretty hot!
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment, it's much appreciated by a newbie at this. I was trying to convey a sexy tone while stressing the emotional connection between them. Glad you liked it!
Date: June 30, 2007 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this sure packs a sexy little punch. Hard to believe this is your virgin fanfic...keep writing! (One question - is there a mirror on the ceiling above them? Or am I being dense?)
Author's Response: Hi sweetie! Thanks for reviewing my little story. Personally I was visualizing them doing it "doggie style" on the bed, facing the dresser mirror, but your idea works too! Ha. Tough to convey when you only have so many words to work with. :)