Date: November 18, 2007 04:02 pm Title: I've been caught with nothing but love on my mind...
ahaha i love this! i have a copy of boink! i think the fourth issue. i know a couple of the girls who were in it. hah, when my mom found it, i insisted that it was art. yay for boston-based perversion!
Date: October 21, 2007 05:59 pm Title: I've got more than I need when your love shines down on me
This is really funny to me cause my husband voluntarily wears red underwear! I had nothing to do with it. He hums the Superman theme whenever he puts them on. Great chapter! The Staples bit was freaking (LOL) hilarious!
Author's Response: Sounds like you have a hell of a catch of a husband - go you!! thanks for the review, str! I appreciate it more than you know. :)
Date: September 27, 2007 01:05 pm Title: I've got more than I need when your love shines down on me
OMG time4moxie that is the funniest fanfic I have ever read. I laughed out loud...twice. I pray to Thor himself that the Office writers will come up with stuff like this for Jim and Pam as a couple. You are amazing. Gold Star, thumbs up and 10 points!
Author's Response: Wow !! You sure know how to lift my spirits with your praise! So, so glad you enjoyed it, jinx!
Date: September 27, 2007 07:19 am Title: I've got more than I need when your love shines down on me
This is great fun :) Why do we have a pic of Pam in her outfit but not one of Jim in his?
Author's Response: hmm....that is a VERY good question. I'll look into it. ;)
Date: September 27, 2007 06:08 am Title: Come out to play....the future lies with you
I knew Pam would buy the karma Sutra after her interest in it during the show. Glad you brought it into this.
Author's Response: yeah, I still giggle when I remember who interested she was in that handout. Hope she's getting to put it to good use nowadays!! Thanks for reviewing, gotkona!
Date: September 27, 2007 03:18 am Title: I've got more than I need when your love shines down on me
That was so good! Perfectly them. What a great prank and Jim's payback made me squee. Yay! It's finally 9/27! Thanks for the smuff, Mox!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, EH!! I appreciate it more than I can say. :)
Date: September 26, 2007 11:34 pm Title: I've got more than I need when your love shines down on me
Befor ethey got to work, I thought this was yet another cute chapter, with some nice banter, maybe a little smuff... and then? Pam's prank took it to a whole new level. So brilliant. I smirked through the entire story and laughed out loud repeatedly. Such an awesome prank you've come up with here! And as if the Jim and Pam voices and characterization weren't spot on, you go and make Dwight perfectly Dwight, too.
Nice work! Loved it.
A little late with my reply, but still completely sincere - thanks so much for taking the time to review; I'm so glad you thought the prank worked. Now to see something like that on the show, hmm?
Date: September 26, 2007 09:40 pm Title: I've got more than I need when your love shines down on me
Oh, Moxie, this was so funny. Dwight sticking his hands down Jim's pants does seem about right. Oh, loyal Dwight. I figured Pam had edited Wikipedia. That was a great prank.
Author's Response: Coming up with a prank that seems believable and FUNNY is so tough, so I'm more than pleased that you thought it was good. Thanks for the review, MA!
Date: September 26, 2007 08:51 pm Title: I've got more than I need when your love shines down on me
Moxie, dear, this is so much fun. I love frisky Pam. I think Shirtless!Jim makes everyone a little crazy. Getting Dwight to do her dirty work -- aieeee! And using WikiPedia to back her up? Clever girl.
“You have no idea,” he replied softly. *thud* You know I can hear that in my head. It's on a loop.
Tomorrow night at 9 cannot get her quickly enough! Thanks for providing some lovely images to distract us!
Date: July 14, 2007 01:21 am Title: Come out to play....the future lies with you
OMG do they have those books in the library? *Thinking* Maybe that's what I'll do tomorrow!
I'm a little slow on Chapter 2 but I made it finally!
Good job, good job! Seriously did I say good job? Good, no great...excellent...spectacular...wundervoll. Another Moxie great! Alright I better stop before I lose my mind...
Author's Response: haha - thanks, dm! Chapter 3 will be around eventually.
Date: July 13, 2007 12:03 pm Title: Come out to play....the future lies with you
No. I refuse to believe there is actually a book out there titled "Tickle His Pickle". No. <fingers in ears> Lalalala I can't hear you!
psst.....It's true!! Even I couldn't make that one up. ;-)
Date: July 10, 2007 12:46 pm Title: Come out to play....the future lies with you
And yet I like that finding the sketch of himself was so much more embarassing and revealing that just Pam's own porn collection. I'm surprised neither of them made mention of Pam finding Jim's magazines!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, because to Pam that sketch is so much more revealing about what she'd been thinking about during the time she drew it. But I think from the point of their relationship that it was important he found it. Thanks for reading!
Date: July 08, 2007 10:33 am Title: Come out to play....the future lies with you
Heehee, another winner, Moxie!
I think it's so cute that Pam is more embarassed by Jim finding her sketch of him rather than the sex books.
And, yes, I think I will pick up some Polish dills next time I'm in the supermarket.
you know, I did that (bought polish dill pickle spears) a few days ago, and I thought of your comment. :-)
We really CAN turn everything into someting about JH/JK, can't we?? ;-)
Date: July 07, 2007 11:04 pm Title: Come out to play....the future lies with you
Oh my goodness....At least LTW has turned out to be good for us fanfic writers in terms of comedy, lol. Tickle His Pickle -- Good Lord is there really a book called that? I have to say I have been waiting for a fic to turn up with Pam having purchased a copy of the Kama Sutra after Diwali (with the way she was so intently perusing it in the episode). This was a lot of fun! More please!
I know - it really IS the worst book title ever, and I cringed when JK used that phrase in the movie. I hope to god he did too. ;-)
Yes, I am SURE Pam bought a copy of the Kama Sutra after Diwali. And hopefully she'll get a chance to crack it open during S4. :-D
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: July 07, 2007 10:36 pm Title: Come out to play....the future lies with you
I'm guessing that Tickle His Pickle is not at my local library.
Fun story!! The part about Andy needling Jim made me think of The Return. Jim was finally trying to take Karen's advice from that day ("you should not encourage him"), and it turns out it was useless advice!
Author's Response: so true (about Karen's advice!) - sometimes there is nothing anyone can do to stop Andy once he gets going!! Glad you liked the story - and you can always order THP at amazon.com. ;-)
Date: July 07, 2007 04:05 pm Title: I've been caught with nothing but love on my mind...
I'm shocked and appalled at such suggestive and explicit subject matter.
You should be ashamed of yourself.
LOL! Did that sound at all convincing?? :)
Please - like you have room to talk! ;-)
I'll work harder to offend you even more next time. (LOL!)
Date: July 07, 2007 08:42 am Title: Come out to play....the future lies with you
Jim placed his mouth over hers, reminding Pam there was a language he spoke even better than Dork.
^^That is a BRILLIANT line. Cheesy, yet so perfect for them.
Thanks!! I like my Jam with just a touch of cheese. :-)
Thanks for th review!
Date: July 06, 2007 09:52 pm Title: Come out to play....the future lies with you
"Tickle His Pickle," blaaugh, LtW, what have you done?
Every good Cosmo Girl knows that there is no such thing as knowing too much about sex...
Good for Pam...also, the whole time I kept thinking about my LJ icon
haha -I'm pretty sure the book came first, but I KNOW!! Of all the euphemisms they could have gone with in that movie, they chose THOSE??? I'm pretty sure JK was cringing inside as he said that. At least, I hope he was.
And that icon? All that is awesome!! Thanks for the review, PPC!
Date: July 06, 2007 08:27 pm Title: Come out to play....the future lies with you
There is not a chance in hell that I would take those books out of the library... LOL That being said, God invented Amazon.com for a reason ;-) I kid, I kid... A hilarious look at the sexual preversions of Jim and Pam. Very creative (and very different!)
Author's Response: bwahahaha - no, neither would I. ;-) And yes, they are all available via amazon.com. :-) Thanks for the review!