Date: July 29, 2007 07:25 am Title: Chapter 1
aww. i know the sleeves represent pam's feelings and stuff like that (um, my vocabulary about things like that has totally left me), but it is really good, and just like, go pam, so gladyour hands aren't in your sleeves
Date: July 03, 2007 09:05 am Title: Chapter 1
I love sleeves as a metaphor for safety and comfort...and that Pam had to leave her comfort zone to get what she wanted. Very, very nicely done!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that someone mentioned the sleeve metaphor. You interpreted it better than I could in my own head as I was writing it! I don't know if I'm just weird, but sometimes I use metaphors, knowing what they mean in an abstract sense, but I can't explain it out in words. Thanks again!
Date: July 03, 2007 07:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Love the immediacy of the door swinging open and them wordlessly reaching for each other. That final sentence is so sensual too. Just lovely.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much, Colette! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for leaving a detailed review!!
Date: July 03, 2007 06:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Mmmm. Lovely little tender, sexy moment. The lack of dialog adds a lot to the atmosphere- it's like the Casino Night kiss, with just hushed, purposeful motion. And now this review is as long as your piece...;)
Author's Response: Thanks for the detailed review!! I'm glad you liked the story!