1 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2019 01:17 pm Title: Decision
I like Jack. He's a good frame character. And the story as well; it's really well constructed and a great read.
10 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2010 11:25 pm Title: Decision
This was so well written, great job Lissa_Maylee! I really appreciated that you had Pam wait two weeks before making an ultimate decision, I think that showed a lot of restraint on your part and respect for Roy (even though he isn't right for her) on Pam's. And I loved that line where Pam said 'I don't want to fill out one of those dating forms' 'Are we dating?' 'Do you want to be?' 'Yes!' Very nice. And the clapping after kissing at the restaurant, even better. Again, this was lovely!
Date: January 30, 2008 08:23 pm Title: Decision
That was a really lovely story. Thanks for sharing! =)
Date: January 30, 2008 08:15 pm Title: Saturday Night
Eeek!! Drunk!Roy is so scary -- I'm glad she stayed at Jim's. Awww sleeping Jim sounds adorable. LOL!
Date: January 30, 2008 07:59 pm Title: Booze Cruise
Wow. Timing really makes such a big difference, doesn't it?
Date: September 27, 2007 02:24 pm Title: Decision
love the ending...lol
its a great story!! :] good job! my props go to you.
10 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2007 05:30 pm Title: Decision
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10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 06:01 pm Title: Decision
awesome story!! i love it!! so cutise!! great job?
i'm assuming this is the end..?
Author's Response: I didn't have plans for any more. Thanks for reviewing!
8 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2006 02:18 pm Title: Decision
Woohoo! Yay for fluffy, Jammy endings. Also, yay for Jack.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2006 09:34 am Title: Decision
Love it, especially Jack taping over the last part. Wonderful
Author's Response:
Yay, Jack!
10 [Report This]Date: August 16, 2006 09:59 am Title: Confrontations
Wow that was a great chapter. I like how you incorporated the film crew in the fic.
Author's Response: Thanks! Jack's pretty intrepid, isn't he?
8 [Report This]Date: August 16, 2006 09:54 am Title: Confrontations
You're sustaining this very nicely. Keep it going! (And poor Jack!).
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like Jack!
8 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2006 07:57 pm Title: Saturday Night
I'm loving this story! Keep it up with the Jam hotness, and make Roy stay away forever!
Author's Response: Thanks! Unfortunately, Roy is coming back in the next chapter...
6 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2006 04:59 pm Title: Saturday Night
Pam taking Jim's picture reminded me of the Kodak commercial that JK was in! Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:
You know, I never even saw that until just now on YouTube. Funny stuff!
Date: August 15, 2006 11:19 am Title: Saturday Night
There's something really hot about Jim and Pam playing Hide & Seek! Nice job.
Author's Response:
I know! I'm glad you agree.
8 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2006 07:59 am Title: Saturday Night
Oooo, I liked it. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2006 02:53 am Title: Booze Cruise
Jim grabbed her wrist and pulled her in close to whisper, “You owe me, Beesly.”
Oooh.
Don't you just hate it when you get stuck when writing?
Author's Response:
I would totally melt.
I'm not going to say for sure, but I think I may have broken the writer's block for this story...
10 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2006 09:33 pm Title: Booze Cruise
Aw...I liked this a lot. :) If only this is how it would have happened....*sigh* Great story!
Author's Response: Aww, yeah, I know. That's really why I wrote it: self-indulgence.
9 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2006 05:47 pm Title: Booze Cruise
That was just such a lovely alternate scenario for Booze Cruise. Loved it. I do hope you continue the story in this universe.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm considering a continuation.
Date: August 11, 2006 03:39 pm Title: Booze Cruise
Good start, both with this fanfic, and with fanfic-ing in general!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it!
8 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2006 02:52 pm Title: Booze Cruise
Great alternate ending! You kept true to the pace of the actual episode (like Michael being put on the brig, hehe!) I think it works as a one-shot, but its your call. I would like to see Jim get that kiss Pam owes him thought...
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you liked the brig scene--it made me smile.
7 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2006 02:25 pm Title: Booze Cruise
Nice alternate ending!
Author's Response: Thank you!
8 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2006 01:41 pm Title: Booze Cruise
Great alternative ending to Booze Cruise. I would love to see where you would go with this.
Author's Response: Thanks--I have a little more, but I've blanked now, so I guess I'll just let it stew a little. Thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2006 01:15 pm Title: Booze Cruise
hehehe! i'm very giddy after reading this.
great job for your first fanfic! and this should not, i repeat NOT, be a one-shot. please continue!
Author's Response:
Yay! I'm glad you liked it!
I've actually done HP and VMars fic before, just not Office. I have a second chapter, but then I'm stuck, so...we'll see.
Thanks for reviewing!