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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2021 03:16 pm Title: She was wearing pink when she answered the door

You know, there are times I want to critically re-assess how toxic Kelly is in the Kelly-Ryan relationship, and there are times I just want to enjoy her stuffing it in his jerky little face. This... is one of the latter.

Author's Response: Hahaha. I really let him have it in this one.  I’m glad I could let you have that moment. :)

Reviewer: Lizzie Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2007 05:56 pm Title: She was wearing pink when she answered the door

HAHAHAHAHA!!!! Awesome

Author's Response: Oh, thanks! Glad to make you smile!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2007 02:47 am Title: She was wearing pink when she answered the door

HAHAHA!!! Hi. La. Ri. Ous. I love. love, love love, love love...


Author's Response: Ooooh, thank you so much! That makes me happy, happy, happy!

Reviewer: receptionist Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2007 05:05 pm Title: She was wearing pink when she answered the door

hilarious!  loved it...


Author's Response: Yay, I'm so glad. Thank you!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2007 03:07 pm Title: She was wearing pink when she answered the door

Wow, I was going to start listing how awesome all of those revenge tatics were, but, all of them made me laugh so hard, and were so something Kelly would do, and just amazing.

And how hard is it to prove you are yourself? Not that I have ever been reported missing, but often, people don't even bother with me... wait that sounds bad. Haha, apparently, I look so innocent they are just like, let her be, she won't do anything.

So, all in all - this story - one funny bit of hilarity.


Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! I suppose Ryan just needed to show his driver's license, but even that would be pretty annoying in Ryan's position. So, you look innocent, huh? Good to know if I need help in a criminal caper... Thank you!

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2007 02:08 pm Title: She was wearing pink when she answered the door

OH MY GOD Kelly is dawesome! Hee! Reported him as "missing". Brilliant. And she totally doesn't get that she's being brutal to him. Love it.

Author's Response: Well, I wrote it just for you! I was trying and trying to do a Kelly POV with plot and motivations and all that, and then I realized that I needed to stick to my strengths. Heh. I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Bailey08 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2007 10:55 am Title: She was wearing pink when she answered the door

Ha!  I agree with larry about him having sex with her right after this.  LOL.    

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you got a chuckle out of it. Kelly is just fun to write (even though I guess I wrote more Ryan here, but you know what I mean).

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2007 09:48 am Title: She was wearing pink when she answered the door

Thus proving that Kelly's ultimate revenge is not getting even, it's just not leaving. Hilarious! :)



Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I think persistence is Kelly's best weapon here. Oblivious persistence. Glad you liked!

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2007 07:51 am Title: She was wearing pink when she answered the door

LOL! Very funny.

The sad thing is he'll probably have sex with her right after this. 



Author's Response: Ha, yeah, probably. I'm glad you liked! Thanks!

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