Date: October 16, 2017 10:48 am Title: Chapter 2
I've read this before... MANY times. Still I sit here sobbing as I read the end of chapter 2 again. I re and reread tons of Jim and Pam fanfic. I absolutely adore it. Some writers bring many emotions out of me. I have to tell you though, I don't often cry at them. Sadness and sorrow? Asolutely. But deep felt tears? I'm sure it's happened but certainly rare. That shows your talent and the depth of your writing. I feel as though I'm watching an episode reading this. Here in chapter 2 it's like I can see and feel Jim's eagerness and anxiety over not hearing from Pam. His willingness to let Karen get things out but then the hot anger when she not only brings in Pam's name, but insults her. His warriness on seeing Dwight, Michael and Toby's mannerisms. Then his anxiety over what the situation could be turning to despair and greif. It pounds at my emotions.
I know it's very likely that you'll never see or read this. However, if you do, though it's been a very long hiatus, PLEASE, with a work like this, that draws emotions from people, it deserves an ending. I'd really really love to see a few more chapters that could wrap this up in such a satisfying way!
Date: June 12, 2008 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 6
Didn't this totally happen in real life? I remember hearing about it. I think.
I totally love how you are writing it.
I love Dwight. Even though he is being totally nice, it is totally realistic.
Btw, I think I forgot to mention in my last review... I LOVED Dwight pranking Jim with the soda. Awesome.
Date: January 30, 2008 07:17 am Title: Chapter 1
OK. I have to admit. As well written as the first couple chapters were, I couldn't read anymore because it made me too sad, and sad hinders my productivity at work, right? So, I see that there's an update and I think, "Hmmm...don't quite remember this one. Let's start from the beginning." I'm so very glad I did. More soon, please?
Date: January 29, 2008 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 8
please please please finish this story! It's so awesome. At first I was horrified, but as I read on I was amazed. Great writing. Very poignant. I like that Dwight is a shoulder to lean on. Please continue it ;-) There aren't near enough hurt/comfort jim/pam stories out there.
Date: August 13, 2007 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
"Because, as sure as bear cubs climb trees, Dwight knew he was now witnessing the complete and utter destruction of Jim Halpert. It gave him none of the pleasure he had imagined in the past." I like your compassionate Dwight; just like when he consoled Pam when she was crying.