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Reviewer: killerqueen Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 1: Content to Compromise

love it!!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  And I have to say (even though someone on TWoP joked that I say this to everyone, when I promise I don't -- have said it to only two other people, LOL), I love your name.  Absolutely LOVE Freddie Mercury.  :o) 

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: StarryDreamer Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: Content to Compromise

Such a great beginning.  I love how perfectly spot on all the characters are.  You really captured exactly their ticks.  Can't wait to read more!!!

Author's Response: Oh please -- you're just saying that because I banged on my keyboard and ordered you to.  :oD  Thanks for the review (and the patient beta-ing, BTW). 

Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 1: Content to Compromise

Sorry...I missed that this was "Chapter 1", so I guess we might see her "spunky" side emerge...hope so and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

No worries - and yeah, there'll be alcohol and a late night or two and...all sorts of juicy stuff.  I'm absolutely incapable of resisting putting them in copromising positions.  ...So to speak.  :O)

Thanks again!

Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: Content to Compromise

Very nicely done.  Is there a chance we might get to see Pam's "spunky" side emerge over the weekend in a follow-up chapter?

Author's Response:

Thank you!  And hahah re: Pam's "spunky" side.  In a word: yes.  :O) Thanks for reviewing!  (And hello, BTW - I don't think I've seen you around these parts before...or, ur, read you around these parts.) 

Thanks again!

Reviewer: Susan M Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 1: Content to Compromise

::bounce-bounce:: It's embarrassing how happy I get when I get the e-mail reminder that girl7 has written another amazing story.  Probably as excited as Jim was to see Pam show up.  :-)

This is a great set up to a verrrry [/jim] promising story.  Lovely location. Potential for mass consumption of alcohol. Jim.  I mean, what more could a gal want? ;-)  Can't wait for the next chapter.  (or for the kissing.... c'mon, you know I have to throw that in. *wink* <-- that's Smiley!Jim's wink, y'know. Hee!)



Author's Response:

It's embarrassing how happy I get when I see that I have a review from you!  And it's even more embarrassing that -- I swear to god -- I can't even think about your smiley!Jim icon without grinning like a jackass.  :o)

Glad you're enjoying the premise thus far (I was so worried that it was totally boring), and just for smiley!Jim icon, I will give you a slight spoiler: There will be kissing.  That's all I'm sayin'.  :O)

Thanks for reviewing -- and for making me grin like a jackass (always a good thing)!

Reviewer: oobadnama Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 1: Content to Compromise

I love Season 2 so much, and I love your writing so much, and I love the endless possibilities for this. I'm looking forward to where you take this, it shall be interesting indeed. Hee.



Author's Response:

Hee -- well the interesting possibilities are exactly what drove me to write this thing.  (Jim? Pam? A gorgeous resort?  With a bar?  And questionable sleeping arrangments?)  :o)

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: jamfan99 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 1: Content to Compromise

Awesome! I love you. I love your stories. I love you writing your stories! (I think I pulled something reaching for the Kras reference) ;)

In all seriousness, you really are a fantastic writer.  You should consider doing it for a living - you'll be rich!



Author's Response:

OMG - I am a rotten, rotten hussy; I didn't catch the JK thing at first!  Naughty me.  :o)

Thank you so much for your kind words -- seriously.  And thanks for reviewing so quickly!

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 1: Content to Compromise

I'm reviewing again b/c I just realized this isn't actually Season 2, but it's pre-season 3, so that rocks - because, well, Season 3 was heartbreaking!  

Author's Response:

Heh - I hear you.  And as much as I love the idea that things are okay between them now (because i refuse to believe that their date didn't lead to months of summertime bliss, LOL), I do miss the sweetness & sexiness of season 2, so I wanted to write it (well, pre-season 2).

Thanks again for the feedback!

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1: Content to Compromise

Awww.....seriously - this made my day.  Why? Well, because you wrote it for one.  Also, I love anything Season2.  And because I can already tell it's going to be made of awesome!  Your Dwight is not only hysterical, but spot on!  More, and soon, please!! 


Author's Response:

You are so sweet -- I'm glad I made your day!  (Glad you liked my Dwight, too; I find it so hard to write him sometimes.) 

I've got the next two chapters done (just need to be edited and re-worked a bit), so I should be posting updates to this one fairly quickly. 

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 1: Content to Compromise

It was so great to get the e-mail reminder that you had posted a new story! And this looks like it will be another great one. I loved how you built the tension - even though I knew Pam wasn't going to skip the trip, I was excited and smiling when she showed up in the parking lot. Can't wait for the rest!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the quick response!  I'm always ridiculously nervous when I post a new fic, so it's nice to get such quick feedback.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 1: Content to Compromise

Oh my.  Pam, Jim and a bus.  Hold on to your butts....

Author's Response:

Okay, I have never heard that saying ("hold on to your butts") before, but I am totally working it into my lexicon from now on.  :o)

Thanks for the uber-quick review; you are all kinds of awesome...

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