Reviews For Memorial Day
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Reviewer: madmen fanatic Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2011 12:40 am Title: Chapter 1

I liked the AU and Jim's improv impressions and that the date went well. And I liked Pam's insighfulness and the happy ending.

I did not like that you skipped the smut!!! You skipped several pages of activity and just jumped to Monday! *sad sigh* :)

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2006 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

she leaned back against Jim, and he put his arms
around her waist, and they stood like that for a while.

What a wonderful, comforting moment. Just beautifully captures the "comfortable is sexy" dynamic between these two.  

I love Pam reminding Jim that he can move coat racks with his mind.

the last thing he needed tonight, with
all of the imaginary Pam porn floating around in his head already

LOL! Pam porn! I love it.

When she tells him she is naked and he slams down the phone I burst out laughing and scared the hell out of everyone in my cubicle row. Try explaining THAT.

 

Thanks very much. 

 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2006 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was so very sweet and so very romantic:  In response, Pam stood up and walked slowly over to Jim’s chair and sat down on his lap. Putting her arms around his neck, she looked him in the eyes and said, “I love you, Jim.”

“Oh God, Pam,” Jim said, enfolding her in his arms, “I love you so much.”

Reviewer: jamjunkie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2006 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was good...love the details....the fact that they were both watching Letterman...perfect

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2006 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Still a favorite!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2006 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Still so sweet.  I love how Pam lies about the Chinese food.  It makes me chuckle.

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