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Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2023 07:06 am Title: The Morning After

Very nice

Reviewer: lovingthursdays Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2010 07:06 pm Title: The Interruption

Good first date

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2007 09:27 am Title: The Morning After

I remember starting this story, so I'm glad I went back to finish reading, because you did a great job with their date.  Jim was so sweet e-mailing everyone to come to the show.  I love that Pam did a coal walk painting and that Oscar acknowledged her improvement.  The second roof date was sweet and romantic.  Creed, somewhat oblivious in the morning, was hysterical, as usual.

Love the sweet little moments between them, and the banter.  I would certainly agree with Pam that things are looking up!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 03:26 pm Title: The Morning After

Oooh, I would say that reads like a good end to the first date.

It was a really sweet story. I love FDFs!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 03:24 pm Title: The Dinner

it better not be hopeless between them. Or else, sadly, my life may be over. Okay, maybe not that dramatic, but not so good.

Aww, that is such a sweet date.

Reading the "swaying isn't dancing" reminded me of a song I wanted to download (swaying)...

"glass jaws" I think you meant glass jars... because glass jaws sounds a bit scary for candles.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 03:18 pm Title: The Art Show

Jim told everyone... so sweet. And he did come, because I was getting nervous for the first few lines that he wasnt going to show up again. And then I would have to hurt him.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 03:13 pm Title: The Resignations

" His mocking face continued. "I think I told you yesterday that I would be there at six soooo I'm pretty sure I'll be there at six.""
That seems so Jim :)
Well, all of the lines seem very Pam and Jim, just that one really caught my eye

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 03:11 pm Title: The Interruption

I can only imagine how Pam felt when Jim said Karen, because MY heart sank.

But... it at least seems sort of positive, he is going to her art show.

Reviewer: Susan M Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 11:12 pm Title: The Interruption

Aw, what a sweet story.  I love how after all this time they can still be so shy toward each other, it's very endearing. I love happy JAM stories and this is a great one! 

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 10:46 pm Title: The Morning After

That was such a sweet ending. They we're so sweetly happy... Ahhh...
Sleeping on the floor of the office was superb and Creed was great.
Very nice.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 06:29 pm Title: The Morning After

The date that nobody wants to end.  (Excuse me for a minute while I squee!!!  Ok, better.)

The second first date was 10 kinds of awesome.  And no wonder the girl's legs gave out.  Nicely done. 

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 06:12 pm Title: The Morning After

Awww Jack and Patty sitting in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g!  Well done on the entire story.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 05:58 pm Title: The Morning After

I was so excited to see another chapter, and you didn't disappoint.  I'm sorry to see it end : )

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 05:48 pm Title: The Morning After

aww....I half-expect Jim to come in for an afternoon nap.  ;-)

Nice, nice job! 

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 05:12 pm Title: The Morning After

Yes, "finally," indeed. :) How wonderfully bizarre is Creed anyway? And yet, he just seems to fit in so perfectly with Jim and Pam (or is it Jack and Patty?) 

Nice! [/kevin] 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 08:26 pm Title: The Dinner

Such a sweet chapter.  I had forgotten that we had Karen to thank for the note with the yogurt lid medal. So very helpful of her!

Reviewer: Team_Pam Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 12:32 pm Title: The Dinner

That's a nice idea for a second first date :) So sweet of Jim... and I'm glad there was a better explanation for why he was late!

Reviewer: Team_Pam Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 12:26 pm Title: The Art Show

Jim getting everyone (almost) in the office to go to Pam's art show -- great idea!

Reviewer: Team_Pam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 12:23 pm Title: The Resignations

*sigh* So happy :) I loved Michael's reaction to Karen and Ryan leaving -- Traitors! Haha. And I loved Jim's persistence at going to Pam's art show. *happy sigh*

Reviewer: Team_Pam Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 12:18 pm Title: The Interruption

Oh my gosh, you nearly gave me a heart attack with that call from Karen!!!! But then you made it all better with the rest... poor Pam to be freaking out like that. Love that he's going to finally go to her art show :) Can't wait to click "Next"!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 10:16 am Title: The Dinner

This line right here:

"There was just a moment, a quiet little one between them, when Pam felt like it was just the two of them on Earth and everything else ceased to exist. It was comfortable again, friends back together after so long, just the two of them."

Kills me. In the best way possible. :)  

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 06:49 am Title: The Dinner

I feel all warm and fuzzy : )

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 06:46 am Title: The Dinner

Yay - I love Lichtenstein, so I knew what piece you meant!  :-)  And I love that they are back up on the roof...

Good stuff.  Very good stuff.  :^) 

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26, 2007 10:05 pm Title: The Dinner

So sweet. Your jim and Pam are really nicely written. A good combo of banter and nerves.
Nice work!

Reviewer: banana slings Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2007 08:41 pm Title: The Art Show

YES! I am in love with this. It's perfect.

Author's Response: Glad you like it so far!

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