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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 13, 2020 12:44 am Title: Chapter 1

Much as I appreciate seeing the complications caused by the show's airing, this is a great piece of fluff for that same scenario.

Reviewer: Susan M Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23, 2007 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ha! So sweet and fun.  What's the matter with you, larry? Nobody's dead. :-P

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2007 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

"on his way to ... something, he couldn't really remember at that moment. It had all kind of blended together lately. He was busier than ever, barely able to get any free time, although it's not like he'd ever done anything with it before. "
That describes my life during the summer. Although what I did with my free time was being here at MTT. But, yep. That is my summer.

See, I think I would be able to be a normal person if I actually saw an actor walking down the street, but I have a feeling I would act like Tiffany... especially if that actor was John Krasinski. And yowza. Yeah, I would have trouble acting normal.

" He found it a little unsettling that people had actually counted the exact seconds of that moment on the booze cruise." I didn't until they mentioned it on the commentary. And then I did. Of course, I only started after S2... in reruns during the summer. Nearly a year ago now (wow, a year ago I was normal and not obsessed with this show)

Aww, I mean, I knew it was Jim Pam, but the ending still made me smile. Yay

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2007 10:11 am Title: Chapter 1

Awesome! This was so fun! And with their mad pranking skills I could totally see Jim and Pam being able to pull this off. At least for a little while. Meaning, until Angela got ticked at Pam about something and let the press in on the secret. Or does the rest of the office staff not know about Sheila?

Reviewer: Alamos Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2007 07:52 am Title: Chapter 1

Classic... very amusing. I love how the girls just "love" Jim after Season 2. I would love to see how they react to Jim after Season 3.  My only constructive criticism is that it not be a oneshot.

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great job, Larry.  Thanks for the spoiler.  May, huh?

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

that was great!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yay!  Larry bringing the happy.  I adore it when you get all meta on us.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was fun!  You had me going.  Good job.

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic, Larry! I love stories that blur the line between fantasy and reality like this. Excellent characterization here, and a great twist with "Sheila." Nicely done!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I loved it, but, damn, Larry, you scared me for a bit. Nice work!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed this - especially the twists at the end!  (That seems to call for a TWSS, I think.)

 And it might be me but this line doesn't read quite right:

"It certainly seemed longer than twenty-seven to him, and Jim now secretly hoped that he’d had only had five more seconds that night."



Author's Response: Thanks for catching that! I went ahead and fixed it. Thanks for kind comments. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: receptionist Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

ahahaha!!!  that was great!  loved the twist on "sheila"!!!

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