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Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2007 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hey Mr. Bill,

What a lovely story!  I loved reading about their early interactions and the qualities that endeared Pam to Jim right from the beginning of their relationship.  And of course I can't get enough of happily married Mr. and Mrs. Halpert.

Thanks for writing this!



Author's Response: So glad you liked it.  I, as have so many other fans of the show, have often wondered/speculated about what Jim and Pam's initial meeting might have been like (fueled no doubt by Jim's deleted talking head from The Client about his best/worst "first" date where it's fairly obvious that he had a strong attraction to Ms. Beesly pretty much from the get go).  So, with ElizabethLynn's suggestion that I expand my initial story (Forgetting Her) I had an opportunity to write my version of how things may have transpired between them.  I've just always felt from watching Seasons 1 & 2 that both Jim and Pam had an almost instant and deep attraction and chemistry for one another that really couldn't be denied.  I just hope the first part of my story was in some way successful in conveying that idea.  I also hope that despite the pitfalls of Season 3, their bond is such that we'll get to see them embark on a truly happy life together!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this. I loved how Jim kept a running list in his head of all of the reasons he loves Pam (I really liked the cupcakes in the hotel one!).  And "She just gets me" was a great look into Jim's thoughts when Pam's note with the "gold medal" fell into his lap. Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks.  I think Pam has a lot of verrry "charming" qualities that Jim has either already come to appreciate or soon will in the near future...her inventiveness with cupcakes being only one example.  I hope the documentary crew lets us observe Jim discovering more of her charms come Season 4...in a very tasteful way, of course!

Reviewer: collardgreens Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

lovely piece of writting. 

Author's Response:

Glad that you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: albie_ Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 12:11 am Title: Chapter 1

Really lovely.


Author's Response: Thank you so much.  It's encouraging that you liked it. 

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 31, 2007 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lovely Mr. Bill.

Author's Response: Thanks.  I hope it was entertaining and maybe brought a smile!

Reviewer: Abigail Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 31, 2007 08:27 am Title: Chapter 1

This was absolutely beautiful!  Your writing style is so natural and totally true to Jim.  I loved this! 

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words.  Originally I had written what is now Part Two, but ElizabethLynn suggested I think about a 3-part story so I thought it would be fun to think about how the relationship between Jim and Pam actually started and then about where it eventually led them.

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