Date: August 16, 2008 08:32 pm Title: The Secret
I totally got you with aim =) As usual FAB!
Date: August 16, 2008 08:31 pm Title: Booze Cruise
lmao omg love it!
Date: August 16, 2008 08:25 pm Title: Email Surveillance
LMAO that is soooo Dwight!
Date: August 16, 2008 08:23 pm Title: Performance Review
LMAO i can so see him tryign to get her to say the wrong name, class!
Date: August 16, 2008 08:22 pm Title: The Client
LMAO at word, you are fab, I love your AN and ETA's almost as much as your fics
Date: August 16, 2008 08:19 pm Title: The Fight
I feel silly reviewing a year later, but me likey
Date: August 16, 2008 08:14 pm Title: The Fire
you're so good at this.
Date: August 16, 2008 08:11 pm Title: Sexual Harassment
that is so smooshy and cute
Date: August 16, 2008 08:07 pm Title: Hot Girl
lmao quidich - nuff said
Date: August 16, 2008 08:05 pm Title: The Alliance
I thought very realistic
Date: August 16, 2008 07:55 pm Title: Health Care
LMAO hillarious
Date: August 16, 2008 07:54 pm Title: Diversity Day
Eeee this was fab!
Date: August 16, 2008 07:52 pm Title: Second Day
This is so cuteeeeee. I can see them looking at each other while typing :)
Date: August 16, 2008 07:50 pm Title: Before The Cameras
So cute. You should def upload the file with the smilies.
Date: July 05, 2008 09:07 pm Title: The Job
Are you thinking about a season 4 edition?! I would LOVE it!!
Date: April 16, 2008 09:12 pm Title: The Job
Yay! Giggly Pam has a date-date!
Such a nice job on this story, ladama. It was a pleasure to finally catch up with it. :)
Date: April 16, 2008 09:05 pm Title: The Negotiation
I think you did really well on this chapter -- the aftermath of The Negotiation -- just wonderful. My heart breaks a little for these poor hopeless people. I'm so glad it eventually went right!
Date: April 16, 2008 09:00 pm Title: Cocktails
Yep, sister's calling Jim on his robo-behavior. ;) Love it.
Date: April 16, 2008 08:43 pm Title: Traveling Salesmen
Jim realizes he needs to keep some distance. His "that way I'll have it" is very smart, to not hurt her feelings or make it look like he's avoiding contact. And you're thinking, "I don't even remember this fic!" Don't worry, I don't expect you to remember all your little lines! :)
Date: April 16, 2008 08:38 pm Title: A Benihana Christmas
I loved this chapter. My favorites:
oh, well, flare gun, you're all set ;-)
well, for a while my tea tasted like pencils and hot sauce ;-)
but then I figured it out
Lovely. :)
Date: April 16, 2008 08:34 pm Title: Branch Closing
I loved the names! (How about Thrilled in Throop? ;))
Date: April 16, 2008 08:32 pm Title: Diwali
Yes, Pam got discouraged, and Jim's playing it cool for his sanity!
Date: April 16, 2008 08:30 pm Title: Initiation
Hmm. I don't understand the line about kissing Dwight or Michael. Does that have something to do with the basic classes?
I like that Pam could kind of explain about the abrupt ending. I wish. :)
Author's Response:
Yeah . . . that was an attempt at an inner-fic reference, don't worry, you weren't the only one that didn't get it.
Date: April 16, 2008 08:26 pm Title: The Coup
I think this is where I left off; this one doesn't seem familiar to me. I think this one's great. I love how you get Karen (of all people) to update Jim on life in Scranton!
You don't need to worry, by the way, about responding to all of these. I'm just going to try to breeze through them, though, and I'll comment whenever I have something particular to say. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for coming back and finishing up the fic :) I like this chapter, I think it's a good indicator of things to come for Karen and Jim (he being in a haze while she basically guides the relationship).
Date: November 23, 2007 06:39 pm Title: Performance Review
The "Dunder Mifflin, this is Sam/Pete" cracked me up! Okay off to read the rest.