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Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2007 08:08 am Title: The Job

:D. this chapter i love nearly as much as that scene in TJ. and now that i saw the first episode of season four also, i just cant stop smiling and being happy. so, this is just perfect!

Author's Response: Wow, Emily, thanks for taking the time to review all of the chapters, I'm sure doing that took much longer than reading the story ;-). I personally love this last chapter, and was more than pleased to see how well it fit with the new episode. I'm so tempted to write a chapter for Fun Run, but I'm going to refrain, for a few more weeks, at least ;-).

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Date: September 29, 2007 08:07 am Title: Beach Games

back to friends (but we all know they both want more than that)

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Date: September 29, 2007 08:06 am Title: Women's Appreciation

oh, WA - great having Jim do a small mention about the prank, and how jim is still 'agoraphobic' and karen is the one pushing him.

and its getting close to the end of the season! 

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Date: September 29, 2007 08:04 am Title: Product Recall

That day. Meaning 'the client' call back.  *drifts off to memories of happy s2*

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Date: September 29, 2007 08:01 am Title: Safety Training

i loved this episode, but it is a strange one following TN, and not being familiar with The Jim Paradox,I can buy that theory. Pam is safe, he can be friends. Sure, why not. I still love the episode, cause its great.

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Date: September 29, 2007 07:51 am Title: The Negotiation

yeah, that whole how long after cocktails was the negotiation was confusing. the day after... week? month? whatever. it is confusing. so i am willing to buy whatever.

pam's mom pushing her again. i love that relationship you have made the two of them have. and jim and larissas. both someone to point out the obvious which they won't admit to themselves, and how they can be as honest and real with those two.

i think its safe to say i am willing to buy these relationships however you write them, and i don't ever really think of them as unrealistic. that could be just me, but it is my two cents. 

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Date: September 29, 2007 07:43 am Title: Cocktails

um, i think i am in love with larissa. go larissa. call him out. thats what sisters are for!

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Date: September 29, 2007 07:42 am Title: Business School

yeah, pam is a bit conflicted and upset during this period i would imagine. i mean, she was expecting people from work to show, her work got insulted, things are weird with jim, she is back with roy. its just a confusing time, and she just wants to be happy, but it isn't working. and i think i have no idea what i am saying anymore

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Date: September 29, 2007 07:40 am Title: Phyllis' Wedding

yes, i echo larissa's "WHAT" for that. i mean, as much as I can understand (shocking), it is still so horrible. heartbreaking. gah! those two. why did it take them a whole season to work this out!

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Date: September 29, 2007 07:38 am Title: Ben Franklin

*sigh* such a rough patch for those two. both trying to act like its no big deal that karen told and that pam doesn't mind. whatever you two. we know the truth. they lobe long tim.

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Date: September 29, 2007 07:36 am Title: The Return

this was the perfect chapter for this episode. and if it had continued on this course, it would have been awesome.

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Date: September 29, 2007 07:33 am Title: Traveling Salesmen

i like the way pam invites jim to see it, but he asks to just email it. yeah, not that i have ever done anything of the sort (looks away... who me....noooo)

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Date: September 29, 2007 07:31 am Title: Back From Vacation

jamanicanjan sun princess. i find it so hard to believe how that photo was spread like wildfire (not for the story, for the show)... but then again, maybe I just don't have friends who would forward slightly pornographic photos around.

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Date: September 29, 2007 07:29 am Title: A Benihana Christmas

I liked so much of this chapter. The light banter, the fact that Pam mentioned the tea pot, how Jim helped inspire the CIA present. Way to connect stuff there!

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Date: September 29, 2007 07:27 am Title: The Convict

Yes, I love that Pam did prank Jim. That was a sweet episode, and that storyline was the only reason I liked that episode. I love their faces when the other knows/figures it out, etc.

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Date: September 29, 2007 07:25 am Title: The Merger

this chapter breaks my heart, poor pam. i mean, her face alone during that episode, how excited she was, and then the back rubbing, and the turn down for coffee, it was such a rough day, and :( for pam... makes me sad. can i skip ahead? be happy?

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Date: September 29, 2007 07:23 am Title: Branch Closing

duh, pam was who he was talking about.

but yeah, i think i can see bitter jim there. it is his sister, and the fact is, family can call us out on a lot of things and we hate them for it, but it makes us think even when we don't want to admit it. and stuff like that. so, i can buy it. 

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Date: September 29, 2007 07:20 am Title: Diwali

that whole night was just crazy michael after crazy michal. i didn't like diwali when it first aired, but rewatching it, its better than i remembered.

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Date: September 29, 2007 07:19 am Title: Initiation

remembering the bet from so many chapters ago. and this chpater made me smile. they are talking. it is still that initial awkwardness, but the friendly and before it all goes to hell in a handbasket.

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Date: September 29, 2007 07:15 am Title: Grief Counseling

yeah,pam's mom is so a mom. just giving that little push. i can understand how pam just can't dial, thats always been my thought - she keeps wanting to, but never can, and then the longer it gets, it just is harder.

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Date: September 29, 2007 07:13 am Title: The Coup

I think it works, it fits really well into that episode, how they are talking, but they aren't 'together' yet. And yeah, Jan being alright with them playing Call of Duty - that always struck me as weird. Like, really?

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Date: September 29, 2007 07:12 am Title: The Convention

i im my mom also. course our ims are nothing like pam and her moms (me: yea i did laundry today. her: i went to the post office.)

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Date: September 29, 2007 07:10 am Title: Gay Witch Hunt

i am in the camp that kevin told jim. i don't know where i first got that idea, but i am totally thinking that. but, yep, i was sorta wondering how you were going to do ims between jim and pam and now i know

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Date: September 29, 2007 07:08 am Title: Casino Night

this is what it would be like before the actual casino night - post dwight prank, pre confession.... and now starts s3... :(

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Date: September 29, 2007 07:07 am Title: Conflict Resolution

*sigh* poor jim, its getting so close :(

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