Date: December 17, 2008 12:07 pm Title: Our Family ties strangle people
This is such a great story. I especially loved this last chapter. It was such a great way to end it, and it even got me thinking that this would be a good way to end the show (when that sad sad day comes..) I look forward to more great stories from you!
Date: December 16, 2008 11:32 pm Title: It's the most wonderful time (wait...did they set someting on fire?)
I've loved your Halpert boys too. You sure you're not a teenage boy? : ) You've got their attitude and language down. Great pics. I really love how the Schrute family is such a big part of the Halperts' lives. Sad to see that this one's finished. I've thoroughly enjoyed it. Loved the Talking Heads, especially Pam's. Perfect way to end your story. Thanks for such a funny and sweet story.
Date: September 27, 2008 08:04 am Title: Our Family ties strangle people
I was so glad to see that this story is still being updated! You write the boys so well, and I love the dialogue you've created for them. The story about their grandfather's death was really finely done. Good job!
Date: September 23, 2008 07:41 am Title: Nipple Twisting Rodeo Clown College? No thanks...
I'm so glad that you keep updating this! it's such a great story. I love how it's linear, but the chapters aren't super co-dependent. it's funny and feels real. you also do a great job of capturing what i think Jim and Pam will be like at that age. This made me LOL: "Hey! Anthrax is not funny!" it's just something i can see Pam saying, ya know? anyway i'm sad that it will be over soon, but i love it!
Date: September 04, 2008 10:45 pm Title: Nipple Twisting Rodeo Clown College? No thanks...
Comparing Jim's need to annoy Dwight to like a drug calling to him is the best comparison ever! I've thoroughly enjoyed these last two chapters and this is one of my favorite stories. Thank you for updating with such a hilarious chapter! I'm sad too that this story is nearing the end, but you've done a fantastic job with it.
Date: July 03, 2008 03:25 pm Title: Our Family ties strangle people
Another wonderful chapter. I definitely still care about this story. I actually squealed when I saw it was updated!
Each one of your chapters is a little gem. I love seeing Jim and Pam as parents and all of their qualities showing up in Ben and Jon.
Looking forward to more!
Date: July 03, 2008 01:56 pm Title: A Little Father/Reluctant and Lazy Sons Bonding Experience
Haha love the man meat reference!
I love the ease these boys have with their dad and just all-around good feeling of this chapter. Love it :) can't wait to see more.
Plus who doesn't love the idea of a sweaty Jim? TMI? Sorry :)
Date: June 23, 2008 01:28 am Title: Act like it's the best meatloaf you ever tasted...
aww. That was so sad. I actually found myself hoping it was just some funny mistake when they got into the car and then I thought "I bet that's what they're thinking too." Great work. Too bad it ended on such a sad note though. Great story overall!
Date: June 23, 2008 01:19 am Title: Beer Us Strength
1) "I promise not to let them harvest your organs for profit." -- SUCH a Dwight Schrute thing to say. You have his kid DOWN!
2) From "We die. We die alone, in this strange place," to "closed caskets" I laughed so hysterically, I choked and almost fell off of my chair.
Date: June 12, 2008 06:22 pm Title: Act like it's the best meatloaf you ever tasted...
I was just thinking about this story earlier and did a little squeal when I saw it was updated. I really love how great Jim and Pam are when it comes to their children and it's so easy to see their personalities in their sons. I really hope you come up with more soon.
Date: June 12, 2008 05:15 pm Title: Act like it's the best meatloaf you ever tasted...
Your story gives me the biggest grin! It is so much fun seeing Jim and Pam: The Next Generation frolic in teenagehood.
This chapter was really moving and it was very well written. The boys quietly dealing with their grief in their uncle's room was a nice touch.
Oh, and Jon diffusing the situation with humour? Perfect.
Can't wait for more of the Halpert Boys!
Date: June 12, 2008 04:54 pm Title: Act like it's the best meatloaf you ever tasted...
Nice job with a tough issue to write about. Love how it brought the teens closer to their parents. It's a maturing experience, for sure, even thought it's extremely uncomfortable to go through. Not surprising to see Roy there as well, given his history with the family. I really liked the end with Jon contemplating his own parents' mortality and not being afraid to discuss those fears with Jim.