Date: August 22, 2007 10:59 am Title: The Box
ooh. this series was delightful and spot on. i loved it!
Date: August 06, 2007 03:13 pm Title: The Bomb
But now—now it was time to be a hero. "Dwight Schrute, don't be a hero!..." Yeah I don't know the rest of those lyrics but they fit D so well :) Your voice for him is really good.
Date: August 06, 2007 02:09 pm Title: The Picture
this story = love. i actually said 'ooh' when i read what ryan does to jim's application. love the last line in the karen chapter, and creed's line about "doritos getting better with age." why doesn't that surprise me, coming from him. and a proposal, what else could be better? except that the idea of jim halpert is probably going to keep me a single woman forever, because the bar's been set too darn high! Great work, though :)
Date: August 06, 2007 01:51 pm Title: The Box
What a great way to do little encapsulated portraits of each of these characters. And Jim, of course. Loved Creed calling him 'the tall kid' and re: Karen cluing in - couldn't help thinking of the old saying, 'do I need to show you a picture?' Also, lovely ending - the ring on a shoelace around his neck is such a touching detail and Pam putting her hand over his heart...big aaawww.
Date: August 06, 2007 12:27 pm Title: The Box
Very sweet! Fun reading!
Date: August 06, 2007 09:39 am Title: The Box
So beautiful. Probably the sweetest thing I've read on here! If an engagement happened, I am completely convinced it would happen just like this. :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2007 08:33 am Title: The Box
Great. Funny. I like the meandering.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: August 06, 2007 07:13 am Title: The Box
Wow! This was so great! Such an interesting idea. And you really got the different voices down pat. Dwight's chapter, in particular, was so Dwight. And Creed's too. Ryan is such a bastard! The only thing I would say is to fix your formatting so it's easier on the eyes. But, yeah, I really enjoyed this!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
I've been trying to fix the formatting, but the story is resisting... I'll keep at it :)
Date: August 06, 2007 06:12 am Title: The Picture
I sincerely hope that Jim begins their talk with "What the hell were you doing going through my desk?"!
Very well written, I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: I always kind of figured that Jim and Karen's talks consisted of a whole lot of Karen talking and Jim listening.... Thanks for the review!
Date: August 06, 2007 06:03 am Title: The Box
“I’ve been calling you Beesly for almost six years now. I’d kind of like it if we could take things in a new direction."
So cute. And such a dork. :) Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: August 06, 2007 05:09 am Title: The Box
Really good. I especially enjoyed the last chapter. I felt that I could see that happening-- a perfect proposal, so sweet.
Author's Response:
That's a great compliment; thank you!
Date: August 06, 2007 04:21 am Title: The Box
I am SUCH a sap for Jam proposals!!! Loved this, BTW.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: August 06, 2007 04:21 am Title: The Picture
Karen, Karen, Karen. Don't go looking for what you don't want to find....
Author's Response: I know! The Karen in my head just can't help herself.
Date: August 06, 2007 02:52 am Title: The Box
Awesome little series! The last one's my favorite, of course. That was just adorable. :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: August 06, 2007 01:23 am Title: The Picture
Oh wow! I love this little series!
Ryan! What a bastard!
And how sweet are Jim and Pam??
“Pam. Could you maybe, um, look at me while I say this?”
So beautiful!
Author's Response: Thanks! Ryan *is* a bastard, isn't he?