Reviews For The First Morning
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Reviewer: dundiefromgod Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2007 12:11 am Title: Chapter 1

This was really well-done. Kandy is quite funny, of course, but more serious Kandy fic is (to me) really good as well. I especially liked the openness of Andy (how true) when compared to Ryan. I think that rings very true to their characters, and how they would interact with Kelly. Good job.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I am so glad that you enjoyed it!  It was quite different for me, especially since when I wrote it no one had attempted to put them together in a sexual situation, so I'm glad that it worked!  And I am so glad that the comparison between Andy and Ryan rang true to their characters.  I know that Andy always tries to wear a mask, but most everyone can always see right through him, and for some reason I imagine that when he falls in love with someone, he'll be genuine and won't be able to keep up a facade.  Ryan, on the other hand, manages to wear his mask really well, even when he is in love.  Thanks again for the review, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2007 10:46 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh that was just lovely!  Excellent comparison between Andy and Ryan.  We always think of Andy as having such a facade but I think you're right and it's actually Ryan that's not showing his true self.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much!!!  I am so glad that you enjoyed this piece and that the comparison of Ryan and Andy rang true for you.  Andy does put on a facade, but everyone can always see right through it, whereas Ryan is so often cold and hard to read.  I'm glad that came through with this little drabble!

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