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Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2007 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Paranoia

This is intriguing.  Everyone's a suspect.  And LeBow is apparently gay for you.

Author's Response: Okay, at first this comment had me scratching my head.  Then I remembered that Smithers has a thing for Mr. Burns.  Got Me!  Yes, everyone is a suspect.  Thanks for coming back.

Reviewer: Claudia Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2007 09:46 am Title: Chapter 1 - Some Killer Coffee!

I´m incredibly happy you decided to do another mystery!  This one so far is GREAT!  There´s so many places you could go with this.  And Angela slapping Kelly... genius!  No guesses yet, I want to see where you take this

Reviewer: albie_ Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2007 08:35 am Title: Chapter 2 - Paranoia

Another great chapter, I really loved Michael's response to it all. From utter shock to selfish to accusatory and all depicted wonderfully. And heeeeeee to Dwight. 

Oh and heh, for the record, I think the reason I am more likely to pick Karen is not because of a  Jam bias. Honestly, there was so little consistency of her character(IMO) on the show, I always feel she has the most to hide, you know? The others, I have more loyalty to and feel I know their characters better. But heh, considering the outcome of yourlast story, I should reevaluate, huh?

I don't think it's Karen, really. She was too openly hostile to Ryan in the first chapter. And Stanley and Kelly would almost be too obvious. Hm... Maybe Jan put Michael up to it... See? And I said I wasn't going to guess. Dammit.  



Author's Response: I think the reason that we see Karen as a shady is that the others are just so funny.  We know everyone pretty well.  Karen is just so "there".  She doesn't make you stop changing the channel.  The others do.  I can almost hear the voice of the other characters in my head when I write their dialogue.  I find if it were not for Jim and Pam and the love triangle, I forget Karen.  Also, thanks Albie for reading my second mystery.

Reviewer: kgreene Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2007 07:33 am Title: Chapter 1 - Some Killer Coffee!

lol... wow, you're gonna make a whole career of this, huh? lol... Good stuff!

Author's Response: I wish I could have a career writing.  I get more satisfaction mentally.  But too late in life for that.  No, I love writing JAM, but I really enjoyed trying to keep you guys guessing.  I am a big Mystery fan.  Love all the shows (Closer, CSI, Law&Order, and the new ones Saving Grace, etc, are wonderful) and I devour JD Robb books and the Stephanie Plum series.  So I challenge myself when I take on these kind of stories.  All though, my husband gets less action since I stopped writing "The Night" and "Porn" series. LOL

Reviewer: bebitched Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2007 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Some Killer Coffee!

Oh, yay, another one! I absolutely loved the first and this one already has me intrigued. Although it's sad because even though Ryan could be a dick, he didn't deserve that. But Kelly is love. Stripping off her clothes and being slapped by Angela? Priceless.

Reviewer: lebow Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2007 07:49 am Title: Chapter 1 - Some Killer Coffee!

Ah, Mr. Burns, LOL!  Angela slapping Kelly is hilarious!

Reviewer: KittyCat Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Some Killer Coffee!

Wait why is Angela still in the Office? Is this story not continuous with the first story?

Author's Response:

This is another story.  If I keep going and killing and arresting employees I'll run out of victims and suspects.  As much as I would love to invent another employee, it would stray from the original characters that I so love.  So Paper Cuts is the name of the series.  I wanted to let anyone who loved Paper Cut 1 (or PCI as Lebow calls it) know it was the same author, so it would be same style.  Also, I just love the words Paper Cut because of the double entendre.  So think of it as the Paper Cut Series.  This one starts directly after "The Job".  So we have a pissed off Karen, new JAM, Ryan promotion, etc.   I hope this is okay with some of the readers. 

Reviewer: Alamos Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Some Killer Coffee!

I liked the other mystery story and I am digging this one. This is one is interesting because it got me to thinking... was Ryan the real intended victim?

Reviewer: Alyssa Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Some Killer Coffee!

I. Am. So. Excited.  I loved the first Paper Cut (the ending was great!) and now that we have a sequel I can start to suspect Karen again like I wanted to all along. Never mind that she had no motives, I still thought she killed Roy.

Anyway, I can't wait to see who dun it this time,

Alyssa

Reviewer: albie_ Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Some Killer Coffee!

Excellent! Another murder mystery! Hm... I'll try to hold back all my wrong guesses, since last time you threw me completely. But I'll just throw in my standard guess of Karen right now :)

Author's Response: If I do a Paper Cut 3 (PCIII), I will just have to kill Karen off to make some of you blood thirsty Jammers happy! LOL

Reviewer: office_romance Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Some Killer Coffee!

OMG!!!! I love this!!!! Poor Ryan, he didn't deserve that.  I think Andy giving Kelly his jacket is soo sweet.  But Angela slapping Kelly is hilarious!!!  This is awesome!!!!

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