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Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2007 07:14 am Title: Cost Effective

haha!  So well played!  You just know that Pam is too competitive to have let the other girl win Jim.  And of course it was his cousin.  Very, very fun!  Thanks!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2007 08:42 pm Title: Cost Effective

Jim, you sneaky boy.  Not to mention a $300 man-whore. (I hope Pam gets her money's worth).

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2007 07:13 pm Title: Cost Effective

Hee! I was predicting that it was a sister or somehting, from his look of recognition, but I bet that took Pam by surprise. Very cute. And yay for becoming roommates! Aw :)

Reviewer: questionforyou Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2007 08:36 pm Title: I still have a rather large fanbase.

"You made all your employees come."

"TWSS."

"TWSS" is now part of my regular vernacular with my friends. It's terrible. I'm like, thirteen years old... anyway, I am really enjoying this series. I could totally see it happening on the show. Glad that the Dwangela secret is out in the open between Jim and Pam. And can't wait to see what JAM does when Jim is up on the auction block! Hee! 

Reviewer: CallofDuty Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2007 04:29 pm Title: I still have a rather large fanbase.

Keep going! This is my favorite story at the moment; I think it would be a totally plausible (and HILARIOUS) premise for an actual episode. I can just see Michael telling everyone that they have no choice :D

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2007 09:40 am Title: I still have a rather large fanbase.

Creed was perfection here! So well done and spot-on. Can't wait to see what happens with Jim!

Reviewer: katiesaysdance Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2007 01:20 pm Title: I still have a rather large fanbase.

what a cliff hanger!!!

cant WAIT till the nect chapter :)

Reviewer: albie_ Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2007 12:31 pm Title: I still have a rather large fanbase.

Hahaha, this story is hysterical. I love it. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Post_it_Thief Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2007 09:36 pm Title: It's Mandatory!

Please say you are continuing this and soon!

They should totally incorporate the charity date into an episode.



Author's Response: Sure am!  I'm away on a family trip but I'll have the next part up by the middle of the week.  Thanks!  :)

Reviewer: Cate the Great Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2007 09:47 pm Title: Well versed in the art of origami

It's cute, and I like it. I hope someone else ends up with Dwight, though. That would get Angela's panties in a twist.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2007 12:24 pm Title: Well versed in the art of origami

Fun story.  I like how you threw in Marjorie.  You left it at a fun spot with the shadowy woman and Dwight being Dwight-like.

Reviewer: katiesaysdance Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2007 08:54 pm Title: It's Mandatory!

LOVE IT!!

you write all the characters so well

cant wait for an update!!!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2007 07:27 pm Title: Well versed in the art of origami

Michael's profile is hilarious, especially the origami! I feel badly for him that he went for such a low bid compared to the guys from Hector-Freemont. Can't wait to see what Dwight goes for!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2007 07:03 pm Title: Well versed in the art of origami

Aw, yay for Pam bidding on Michael (even if she was forced into it). And, wow, Dwight - that does sound romantic! Ha.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2007 06:31 pm Title: Well versed in the art of origami

Ew, Michael!  Just ew!  Sweet of Jim to make Pam bid on him, sort of....

Angela got a hooker!  Well, almost... 

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2007 06:16 pm Title: Well versed in the art of origami

I read each chapter with a big grin on my face.  So much fun! 

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2007 03:44 pm Title: It's Mandatory!

This would make such a good ep for realsies!  I am dying to know who will get Jim.

C'mon, Pam, step up!

Reviewer: Stilla Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2007 03:36 pm Title: It's Mandatory!

Oh, ExtremelyGruntled.... how gruntled we all are that you've posted another chapter!! This is awesome, and ... I have to admit... I'm completely on pins and needles to see what happens to Jim!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2007 03:41 am Title: Does it involve chocolate?

Love this so far! Everyone's so in character, and this is such a fun plot premise that I'd like to see them actually do an episode like this on the show! I also love the Jim/Pam, Andy/Kelly stuff. But Andy's outfit! Yikes!

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2007 10:37 pm Title: Does it involve chocolate?

This is so much fun!

 I loved this:

Andy: "Man-cardigans are all the rage these days. The ladies love a man in a cardigan. And bright colors. And chest hair. So why not combine them into a bona fide lady-magnet ensemble?"
Can't wait to read more!

 

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2007 09:45 pm Title: Does it involve chocolate?

Man-cardigans are all the rage these days. The ladies love a man in a cardigan. And bright colors. And chest hair.

Ha!  So true!  I love it ExtremelyGruntled.  I wish this was on the show.  And Poor Toby! I feel so bad for him.  I hope he gets a great date at the auction.  I can't wait for more.  Lovely job!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2007 08:02 pm Title: Does it involve chocolate?

The ladies love a man in a cardigan. Heh.  Well, it does depend on the man.  (And yay for Kandy!!)

"I do not put out on the first date!"
"Really? I seem to remember differently."

Awesome.  I think that's how it happened, too! 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2007 07:54 pm Title: It's Mandatory!

Oh. My.  This would make a great episode!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2007 07:51 pm Title: Does it involve chocolate?

Uh oh. Please tell me the mystery woman isn't Karen! I can just see her and Pam in a bidding war! And I sure hope someone bids on poor Toby. 

Author's Response: Rest assured, this is a Karen-free story.  ;)

Reviewer: alferz Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2007 07:49 pm Title: Does it involve chocolate?

I remember reading this on TWOP and loved the idea (even if it was rather sitcomy) so I geeked out when I saw this story. It's awesome so far and I'm hooked, can't wait for more!

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