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Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2007 08:43 am Title: Valentine's Day 2006, Part II

What a wonderful story.  I loved it!  Especially this part:

Pam scrunched up her nose and forehead at his words, and he fell a little more in love with her.

Heck, I fell a little more in love with her!

Thanks for a great story.



Author's Response: Thank you for all of your reviews Beeswax. Pam is completely adorable anyway, but for me, it's her facial expressions that put her over the top. They're beyond cute, it's like 1/2 baby panda and 1/2 baby bunny.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2007 05:19 am Title: Valentine's Day 2006, Part II

Oh, wow, this was so great in so many ways.

Leaving the guy who had spent a week just trying to get her friendship back, so that she could be with the guy who didn’t love her enough to even send her flowers.  Wow.  Angsty and delicious.  And the very essence of the difference between Jim & Roy.



Author's Response: I really felt like that was the essence as well. That she left someone who truly valued her every day, to be with someone who had long since taken her for granted. Thank you for your review lisahoo.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2007 04:12 am Title: Valentine's Day 2006, Part II

Really sweet.  Good job!

Author's Response: I hope it was, and I'm glad you found it that way. A little angst, but really just a simple, short, and sweet story. Thanks for your review NanReg.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 11:10 pm Title: Valentine's Day 2006, Part II

So poignant!  Thank God the girl finally woke up, eh?

Author's Response: Thank God indeed. Some never do. Thank you for your review Vampiric Blood, and cool name.

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 09:54 pm Title: Valentine's Day 2006, Part II

That was so sweet. Really nice ending to a really nice story. And it fit in so well. :)

Author's Response: I'm really glad you felt it fit in. It's a short story really, but hopefully put together it all makes sense. The only loose string is Pam's picture, but I did that on purpose, because it's supposed to be the picture from "Business School," and therefore Pam would keep it. Thanks for the review desert island.

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 05:16 am Title: Four Days Ago

Oh that Jim!  He's full of good ideas.

Great chapter!



Author's Response: He is, I figure it comes from years of pranking. Quick on his feet. Thanks for the review Beeswax.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2007 04:28 am Title: Four Days Ago

Not the money beets, but some damn fine beets nonetheless!  OMG, I cannot wait for the next chapter!


Author's Response: You put the money beets on top, they sell the fastest. Smart. Thank you for your review lisahoo.

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2007 06:56 am Title: Two Weeks Ago

I always love stories that fill in the blanks of what we see on the show, and this is a really interesting concept! And the fact that Jim uses something good that happened to him to ultimately help out Pam? Love. Looking forward to the rest!

Author's Response: Well, if you notice, this story references a lot of different episodes. With the biggest one being (and I'm not sure how many people got this) the picture Pam makes for Jim. Thanks for the review supergirlsudz.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2007 05:40 am Title: Two Weeks Ago

I would really like to see a woodcarving of the DM building!!


Author's Response: I would too. And, really I think woodcarving is an overlooked thing in fic in general. Thanks for your review lisahoo.

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2007 04:19 am Title: Two Weeks Ago

You've really captured Jim and Pam here and the magic of season 2.

More please!



Author's Response: Thank you very much. I (of course) love Season 2 Jim/Pam, and hope to see more of that in Season 4. More is coming, the third chapter will be posted shortly, and then one more to go.

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2007 11:38 pm Title: Two Weeks Ago

Hmmm. Jim can;t wait to see it and I can;t wait to hear more about what is going on in his mind and what is happening 2 weeks later... very intriguing.
Liking this a lot!

Author's Response: Yes, everything will be made clear, I hope. The next chapter especially makes things clearer. Thanks for your review desert island.

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2007 11:33 pm Title: Valentine's Day 2006, Part I

Oooh. I am intrigued. I love it when Jim gets some guts and makes a move. Always makes me happy. So, yay, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I also love that, and that is what this story is about really. Jim recognizing the importance of his friendship with Pam, and being proactive about making it better. Thank you for your review desert island.

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2007 06:47 pm Title: Valentine's Day 2006, Part I

I really like what you've done with this and I can hardly wait to see exactly what made Pam smile.  Nice work!

Author's Response: Hopefully it will make you smile too. Thank you for the review Beeswax.

Reviewer: annagirl93 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2007 09:17 am Title: Valentine's Day 2006, Part I

ooo, i wanna know what happens next!! hurry w/ the next chapter!

Author's Response: The next chapter is coming soon, but before you know what happens next, you've got to know how they got there from the past. Well, at least in this story you do. Thanks for the review annagirl93.

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2007 08:36 am Title: Valentine's Day 2006, Part I

Ack! I was bummed out for a sec until I read your end notes...so glad this will continue!  I just wish Jim could have given her a damn daisy or something in the episode.  Stupid boy ;)

Author's Response: It's never, ever easy when it comes to Jim/Pam. However, what Jim gave her is better then a flower (I think). Thanks for the review secondrink.

Reviewer: Abigail Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2007 07:51 am Title: Valentine's Day 2006, Part I

Oh how I hate to see Jim suffer.  This is great.  Please update soon!



Author's Response: I also hate to see Jim suffer, but he has to a little for this. Something has to explain how things got somewhat better between the end of "Valentine's Day" and "Dwight's Speech." It will be updated soon, and thank you for the review Abigail.

Reviewer: andromeda Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2007 07:11 am Title: Valentine's Day 2006, Part I

This is very cute. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: The next chapter should be up soon, and thanks for the kind words and review andromeda.

Reviewer: sedimentary Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2007 05:22 am Title: Valentine's Day 2006, Part I

I really enjoyed this and can't wait to see what that card says.  You ARE going to tell us what that card says aren't you??

Author's Response: You'll find out at least some of what the card says, I can assure you. However, its more than just what the card says, it's also what the card is. If that makes any sense, and hopefully soon it will. Thank you for the review sedimentary.

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